Amelie Mara Poet Verse

Rooting For 8 To Five

Woman of Fertile Earth, come sing to me 

let these hands, feet explore your hidden wonder 

to submerge into dewy grounds rippling life's music,

of infant buds lisping tenderly among field's roots

as nature grants lush springtime its tuneful arrival.



Rooting For 8 To 5 !: nette onclaud's Contest
4th January 2017 

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Andrea Dietrich January 10, 2017 at 3:49 PM wow, like a song of glory to nature. congrats on a well deserved win.

Sushma A. Singh January 9, 2017 at 10:43 PM Beautiful! Congrats!

John Lawless January 9, 2017 at 4:47 PM Amelie, this has a beautiful, almost meditative, flow. Each line sounding its own tune to join with the others..Great job...

Daniel Turner January 9, 2017 at 4:09 PM This almost reads as if nette wrote it herself. You have matched her style very well. Congratulations, Amelie:) John Hamilton October 22, 2017 at 11:41 PM Yeah it's amazingly similar style right? No wonder she won!

Agnes Krampe January 9, 2017 at 1:31 PM This is absolutely beautiful, Amelie. Your poem really speaks to me. A 7. Congratulations on your well deserved win.

Nette Onclaud January 9, 2017 at 12:51 PM this really spoke to me-- very haunting, amelie.. hope you could write more often.. sweet congrats and thanks for joining.. hugggs