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Room Won'T Disclose

Majestic flight sweeps up from lobby sprawl
Mattress padding pink carpet creeps corners 
Bannisters ornate in century's old discussions
Omit disclosure of grim history above

Uniform scuff tread flat railed staircase 
Stretches ominously into third level dim
Each step taken fades from life the stepper 
Cobwebs claim frames of dust dampened portraits

Compressing is staircase from dingy third
Wide shouldered folk hunch, tunnel encroaching
Trapdoor top is a shock to wood tread traveller
Rejoicing of stiffened hinges, solitary sound 

Huddled roofspace floods intrepid with doom 
Heanous endings leach from panelled attic walls
Slivers of snowdust rays showcase eye sockets 
Emptied in skulls committed to fourth floor torture




6th September 2020 

The Fourth Floor of Nowhere Poetry Contest 
Craig Cornish

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020




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Date: 9/6/2020 1:10:00 AM
What a wonderfully spooky, eerie, scary missive, Sigrid. Wow! My hair was standing on end as I read.
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Sigrid Ermine
Date: 9/6/2020 5:23:00 AM
Ta, Caren..! Never know when writing. Good it got a feel across!
Date: 9/5/2020 11:24:00 PM
Had a "red rum" moment there! Definitely wins the award for most creepy horror movie poem of the day. What a talent you show here for going dark, Sigrid. I wish you all the best in Craig's contest.
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Sigrid Ermine
Date: 9/5/2020 11:51:00 PM
That's a huge comparison. Wow, it's cool to think it translates that way! Thank you, John. Hugs. Appreciate you stopping in.

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