Room for Rent

Empty, Barren ribcage- Hollow in your absence. Rhythmic echoes of a love lost. No tenant could compare to you, my love. In vain, I try to fill the void. Dusty room, in ruins- Cobwebs take hold. Empty.
Sponsored by: Nette Onclaud Written 8/3/25
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Dietrich Avatar
August 9, 2025 at 1:11 PM
Love how you did this metaphorical. Big congrats
Hill Avatar
August 10, 2025 at 9:35 PM
Thank you very much, I truly appreciate you taking the time to read and comment :)
Rodrigues Avatar
August 6, 2025 at 1:14 PM
Well done, Talia! Congrats!
Hill Avatar
August 6, 2025 at 6:39 PM
Thank you! :)
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