Room

What sweet Vanilla smell,
as gilded memories pass through.

Dwelling on works as they transcend
and cut into-
Aromatic Vanilla.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Tsiluma Avatar
July 7, 2012 at 5:18 AM
Short but extremely well thought out -nice!
Martinez-Rivera Avatar
July 7, 2012 at 8:49 AM
I find length a construct of the imagination if the mind can say what it wants to say in five lines then it should only take five lines.
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