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Desires, fantasies, sprung from gym-nasties. Vivid thoughts during my workout, will later become a reality. Confidence prevails, and I got you alone. After two dinners, a matinee, and countless nude pictures to my cellular phone. I finally got you alone!! In my penthouse suite, room 223. Warm Saki, conversation, a gentle massage. I start with your feet. Jared Pickett 12/29/09 Asavvy1

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Date: 1/8/2010 12:03:00 PM
Very HOT!! Now I'm going on to part 2...Very enjoyable reading...Marty
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Date: 12/31/2009 4:49:00 PM
Ok you can start with her feet,She can continue with your back,lol/:) Sweet poem indeed-- Charma
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Date: 12/30/2009 5:08:00 AM
Not Bad Son... I'll take a massage as well...What room ...223.. Works for me...Nice work as usual...Oh, by the way...Good luck on the Prince's overthrowing the King....Ahhh...Royalty has it's advantages...MMMUUUHHHHAAA
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Date: 12/29/2009 3:03:00 PM
Interesting write. Keep the pen flowing. Sara
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Date: 12/29/2009 1:22:00 PM
Sounds like U had fun.. and not just writing poetry either... good for u Lone Wolf ..glad u found Lady Wolf to excite u enough to make the holidays worthwhile... "Sweetie"
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Date: 12/29/2009 1:22:00 PM
not the feet, that is the way to a women's heart. LOL good write.
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Date: 12/29/2009 1:04:00 PM
Sensual words describing a pleasant evening that seems to be heating up...Raul
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Date: 12/29/2009 12:13:00 PM
I thank you for writing and sharing your poetry with us here at PoetrySoup Jared. I offer you warm greeting for the New Year with best wishes to you on your writing endeavors in 2010 whatever they may be. Love, Carol
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