Jared Pickett Poet Free verse

Room 223

Desires, 
fantasies,
sprung from gym-nasties. 
Vivid thoughts during my workout,
will later become a reality.

Confidence prevails,
and I got you alone.
After two dinners, 
a matinee, 
and countless nude pictures
to my cellular phone.
I finally got you alone!!
In my penthouse suite,
room 223.
Warm Saki,
conversation,
a gentle massage.

I start with your feet. 



Jared Pickett
12/29/09	
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Marty Owens January 8, 2010 at 12:03 PM Very HOT!! Now I'm going on to part 2...Very enjoyable reading...Marty

Charmaine Chircop December 31, 2009 at 4:49 PM Ok you can start with her feet,She can continue with your back,lol/:) Sweet poem indeed-- Charma

Richard Pickett December 30, 2009 at 5:08 AM Not Bad Son... I'll take a massage as well...What room ...223.. Works for me...Nice work as usual...Oh, by the way...Good luck on the Prince's overthrowing the King....Ahhh...Royalty has it's advantages...MMMUUUHHHHAAA

Sara Kendrick December 29, 2009 at 3:03 PM Interesting write. Keep the pen flowing. Sara

Linda-Marie Sweetheart December 29, 2009 at 1:22 PM Sounds like U had fun.. and not just writing poetry either... good for u Lone Wolf ..glad u found Lady Wolf to excite u enough to make the holidays worthwhile... "Sweetie"

Doris Culverhouse December 29, 2009 at 1:22 PM not the feet, that is the way to a women's heart. LOL good write.

Raul Moreno December 29, 2009 at 1:04 PM Sensual words describing a pleasant evening that seems to be heating up...Raul

Carol Sunshine Brown December 29, 2009 at 12:13 PM I thank you for writing and sharing your poetry with us here at PoetrySoup Jared. I offer you warm greeting for the New Year with best wishes to you on your writing endeavors in 2010 whatever they may be. Love, Carol