Rooftop of New York

Sky is running in New York 
It is always in movement 
Even under immensity

Cocoa yard is dizzy in New York 
The crowd rushes by 
Even under the rain 

Sky is flooding New York 
With its blue-grey coat 
Even under the boat
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Brown Avatar
August 3, 2022 at 11:06 AM
I really like this Aby. it is in motion, puts me right there.
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August 2, 2022 at 12:26 PM
Your short, snappy poem contains several fine images. In fact the opening line caught my attention + desire to read more with a sky "running." Best wishes, Brian
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