Romantic Sunset

You and Me in Love Walk on the hot boiling sand The day is over Waves dance by our sides Your eyes melt me like honey Let us never sleep Even if night comes We shall pretend it is day The sky is purple We shall sit and gaze At the gorgeous evening It is so blissful!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Sweetheart Avatar
November 8, 2011 at 5:28 PM
Congrats on a brilliant win with this exciting set of Haikus luv..
Fisher Avatar
November 8, 2011 at 11:28 AM
Many congrats on your contest win - luv Janette
Gangabissoon Avatar
November 8, 2011 at 8:15 AM
Thank you and thanks to all who appreciate :)
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November 8, 2011 at 7:39 AM
Congrats on your winning write !!! Michael
Deane Avatar
November 8, 2011 at 6:34 AM
Beautiful Haiku...congrats to you for your win in PD's contest...luv shannon
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November 8, 2011 at 5:52 AM
Congratulations on your win in P.D.'s "Sunset Haiku" contest Anoucheka. Love, Carol
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November 7, 2011 at 9:58 PM
A.G.,~;-) CONGRATULATIONS, thank you for supporting my SUNSET contest* this contest was awesome* I had to try a few HAIKUS of my own. Have a wonderful week, GOD BLESS,..p.d.
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November 8, 2011 at 2:57 AM
Thanks for selecting my poem :)
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