Kim Rodrigues Poet Triolet

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A Triolet to Make My Day, Andrea Dietrich, 6/23/2026

Romantic Sunrise-triolet

I long to ink the sunrise pink,
whilst heeling tall on sailboat deck.
I drink the blue impassioned drink.
I long to ink the sunrise pink,
Coerce the sun with brilliant wink,
Infuse the dawn with fluid peck.
I long to ink the sunrise pink,
whilst heeling tall on sailboat deck.

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Sam Kauffman July 9, 2026 at 11:48 AM Kim, congratulations on your win. I love how you used the scenery and sailboat as a source of inspiration. High fives and blessings! Kim Rodrigues July 9, 2026 at 2:36 PM Thank you, Sam!

Evelyn Judy Buehler July 3, 2026 at 2:01 PM A colorful way to start the day! A beautiful triolet, Kim! Congratulations on your win. :) Kim Rodrigues July 3, 2026 at 3:39 PM Thank you, Evelyn!

Trina Layne July 2, 2026 at 8:04 AM Oooo...romantic, indeed! Congrats, Kim. Kim Rodrigues July 2, 2026 at 7:36 PM Thanks, Trina! :)

Sotto Poet July 2, 2026 at 4:37 AM Congratulations on your contest win with your excellent Triolet poem, Kim. Kim Rodrigues July 2, 2026 at 6:05 AM Thank you, Lasaad!

Andrea Dietrich July 2, 2026 at 12:51 AM So interesting, Kim, how you made heeling on a sailboat deck sexy (I had to look up heeling and I didn't know it could be used in reference to boating!). I really loved your wording in the other lines. A very romantic sunset indeed. Congrats on your win Kim Rodrigues July 2, 2026 at 6:06 AM Thank you so much! Triolets are fun to write! Hugs

Paige Hind June 25, 2026 at 3:32 PM gorgeous, KIM <3 I love this one, you really love the sea Kim Rodrigues June 25, 2026 at 6:54 PM I really do! Hugs and thanks!

Moon Harp June 23, 2026 at 9:16 PM I love this poem, Kim! It is a fav for me. And the rhymes are out of the box! Moon Harp Kim Rodrigues June 24, 2026 at 6:12 AM Thank you, Moon Harp! So glad you liked this. Blessings

Joseph P. DiMino June 23, 2026 at 9:16 AM Perfectly beautiful! Wow. Great imagery and sense. Love it! Love the ocean as well. My great-grandpa was captain of a tall ship in the Mediterranean. Went down with his ship during a storm. Old tradition. Kim Rodrigues June 23, 2026 at 9:48 AM Oh my! Thank you, Joe!