Eve Roper Poet Free verse

Romantic Heaven

As he walked with pride,  through the fields of ocean tides
a youth gathered hearts. And then one day his petals wide;
his heart broke the surface as he gasped for breath, a bride.
Being drawn away from his youth gathered bosom, she cried.
No longer she would be alone, she deserved someone who cared.
We showed each other just how happy we've made the other.
A lifetime of new beginnings becomes as one together.


6/22/2018

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Besma Riabi Dziri June 29, 2018 at 12:43 PM "A lifetime of new beginnings becomes as one together." Refreshing our heart, mind and soul is one of the secrets to embrace beauty, youth, love.. It is a journey of growth, change, renewal, enlightenment, life in motion.. an exquisite write of depth and insight! A pleasure to read. Thank you so much dear Eve for sharing. Stay safe and blessed.

David Smith June 26, 2018 at 4:41 PM Always a special treat to read poem that shows romance is still alive and kicking in a world that for the most part does not appreciate how delicate a flower it is, but well worth the effort in growing to maturity. ps This one was in full bloom with all petals intact. Best wishes as always David in NZ

Susan Gentry June 25, 2018 at 11:50 PM Congratulations on your win with this beautiful love story told in 7 lines. Well done! :)

Faraz Ajmal June 25, 2018 at 6:00 PM Many congratulations on your well deserved win, it is indeed a beauty

Edward Ibeh June 25, 2018 at 3:53 PM I take great pleasure in sending congratulations for your fine win, Eve!

Mansi Sharma June 25, 2018 at 3:00 PM Very beautiful! Congratulations! :)

Pandita Sietesantos June 25, 2018 at 9:11 AM A most beautiful romantic heaven indeed! Congratulations, my friend, Eve on your sweet win - a heavenly write! Hugs and love. Pandita

Silent One June 25, 2018 at 7:01 AM Sounds like heaven Eve.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..

Cheryl Hoffman June 23, 2018 at 9:57 PM A wonderful romantic write Eve; Good luck in the contest!~Che :)

Arthur Vaso June 23, 2018 at 1:27 AM Romantico!!!!!

Tom Cunningham June 22, 2018 at 9:43 PM Lovely romantic verse Eve. Tom