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Romantic - Haiku

romantic - haiku

steaming interlude
trembling geysers marking time
soft cloud at climax


3/3/2015
visual two

passionhaiku

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Casarah Nance

March 11, 2015 at 5:28 PM

Grats on your win, third line-wow, i like it :P)

John Lawless

March 11, 2015 at 5:48 PM

Thanks Casarah for stopping by.

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

March 9, 2015 at 1:00 AM

a great haiku of pure passion...congrats on your great win...hugs, Rhonda

John Lawless

March 11, 2015 at 5:47 PM

Thanks Rhonda, glad you liked it.

Connie Marcum Wong

March 8, 2015 at 10:09 PM

I am so glad this did well in the contest John. Congratulations!

John Lawless

March 11, 2015 at 5:45 PM

Connie, thanks for stopping by.

Skat A

March 8, 2015 at 6:16 PM

JOHN, CONGRATULATIONS, on your Win ~SKAT~

John Lawless

March 11, 2015 at 5:47 PM

Thanks SKAT,

Poet Destroyer A

March 8, 2015 at 11:54 AM

John, Congratulations, a mighty romantic win. Always & Forever ~LINDA~

Debbie Guzzi

March 7, 2015 at 6:42 PM

Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

John Lawless

March 11, 2015 at 5:45 PM

thanks Debbie

Joseph May

March 7, 2015 at 3:16 PM

Congrats on a great win John

John Lawless

March 11, 2015 at 5:44 PM

Thanks Joseph

Sandra Haight

March 7, 2015 at 2:03 PM

Congratulations on your great win, John. A very romantic and nice interpretation of the visual. Sandra

John Lawless

March 11, 2015 at 5:44 PM

Thanks Sandra, it is not easy to warm up to a haiku.

Frederic Parker

March 7, 2015 at 12:59 PM

Congratulations on a very well defined descriptive haiku

John Lawless

March 11, 2015 at 5:43 PM

Thanks you Frederic, I find the haiku a troubling form but I do so enjoy a good struggle.

Charlotte Puddifoot

March 7, 2015 at 11:02 AM

this is a wonderful haiku, 'steaming' indeed, very passionate; I particularly love that last line - congrats on your win!

John Lawless

March 11, 2015 at 5:42 PM

Thanks Charlotte glad you like it.

Kim Shaw

March 7, 2015 at 7:43 AM

Congratulations John! This is a definite favorite, as I love how each word is perfectly placed in the 'thimble' as if inscribed! Hugs, Kimberly

John Lawless

March 7, 2015 at 7:49 AM

Thanks Kimberly for you kind words. Perhaps my next contest theme will be '''THIMBLES"""

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty

March 7, 2015 at 5:42 AM

Great haiku...CONGRATS

John Lawless

March 7, 2015 at 7:13 AM

Thank you Rajat.

Jan Allison

March 7, 2015 at 4:52 AM

Beautifully sensual - i especially love the final line:-) Hugs Jan xx

John Lawless

March 7, 2015 at 7:13 AM

Thanks Jan, these forms and this topic forced us to put the fullness of passion into the proverbial "thimble"...(I wonder how many supers know what a thimble is?). As I get older my language reaches the "archaic" stage.