Gary Smith Poet Couplet

Romantic Charm In Four Lines-In Love's Embrace

In love's embrace we are entwined

A sweeter place, ne'er could there be

So in your arms, I'll stay my love

My heart, it beats a symphony.









Entry for Romantic charm in 4 lines - Poetry Contest
Sponsored by Silent One
13/2/18.  Placed 2nd.

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Line Gauthier February 18, 2018 at 2:54 PM Charming four-liner. Congrats on your win, Gary. Gary Smith February 18, 2018 at 3:09 PM Thank you Line :)

Andrea Dietrich February 15, 2018 at 6:35 PM Romantic as can be!!! You fit the contest to a T! Congrats, Gary. Gary Smith February 15, 2018 at 6:35 PM Thank you Andrea :)

Anne-Lise Andresen February 14, 2018 at 12:14 PM - Congratulations, Gary :) - // Anne-Lise :) Gary Smith February 14, 2018 at 1:57 PM Thank you Anne-Lise :)

Alexis Y. February 14, 2018 at 9:26 AM Hi Gary, These four lines are lines are sweet and romantic. Congratulations on your winning write. PS, Happy Valentine's Day;-) Alexis Gary Smith February 14, 2018 at 9:28 AM Thank you Alexis :)

Silent One February 14, 2018 at 8:43 AM Sweet music Gary.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest.. Gary Smith February 14, 2018 at 8:50 AM Thank you Silent One :)

Emma Green February 14, 2018 at 5:33 AM Four perfect lines: tenderness start to finish, meter and form absolutely ideal. Gary Smith February 14, 2018 at 5:41 AM Thank you Emma :)

Darlene De Beaulieu February 13, 2018 at 6:48 PM Gary this is a beautiful love poem. Have a nice eveningmy friend. Gary Smith February 13, 2018 at 6:50 PM Thank you Darlene :)

Anne-Lise Andresen February 13, 2018 at 2:30 PM - A sweet and romantic poem, Gary :) - Best wishes in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Gary Smith February 13, 2018 at 2:44 PM Thank you Anne-Lise :)

Arturo Michael February 13, 2018 at 2:26 PM A sweet and lovely melody...A wonderful place to be...All the best Gary Gary Smith February 13, 2018 at 2:27 PM Thank you Arturo :)