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Romantic Breath

under the cimmerian lulling restful still night a new beginning of twilight to see the tidal wave of ember flames passionate eyes so sensuous is intimate sweet fruit taste of hope favored love 7/26/2020 Edward Ibeh invented poem form, Yalto: Line 1 to 15: 3,-4-2,-4-5-3-2-3-2-3-3-5-6-1-5 syllables. Strand Completely New (14)Any Theme Any Form Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Brian Strand

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Date: 8/8/2020 4:49:00 AM
Oh wow! I'm floored by this excellent Yalto of yours, Eve:-) You've mastered it, no question. Congratulations on your #1 win in Brian's contest!
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Date: 7/27/2020 12:22:00 PM
Hello Eve Roper, I find this poem romantic. Enjoy your day my friend.
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Date: 7/27/2020 10:45:00 AM
I am so moved by your creation, Eve, Good luck..,we are both in Brian's contest,)) Love the form you chose Panagiota
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Date: 7/27/2020 6:25:00 AM
Hi Eve, this is such a wonderful write from your golden pen. It does not seem as if it is an easy form to do. You give the whole piece a beautiful flow. Have a wonderful Monday. Hugs....Mike. XX
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Date: 7/27/2020 5:36:00 AM
Beautiful poem Eve :)
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Date: 7/27/2020 1:25:00 AM
Mesmerizing dearest, Eve! So mastfurly done! Hugs xxx
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