Eve Roper Poet Verse

Romantic Breath

under the
          cimmerian
               lulling
                    restful still night 

     a new beginning
          of twilight 
               to see
                    the tidal 

     wave of
          ember flames
               passionate
                    eyes so sensuous 

     is intimate sweet fruit
          taste
               of hope favored love

7/26/2020

Edward Ibeh invented poem form, Yalto: Line 1 to 15: 3,-4-2,-4-5-3-2-3-2-3-3-5-6-1-5 syllables.

Strand Completely New (14)Any Theme Any Form Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Brian Strand

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Edward Ibeh August 8, 2020 at 4:49 AM Oh wow! I'm floored by this excellent Yalto of yours, Eve:-) You've mastered it, no question. Congratulations on your #1 win in Brian's contest!

Darlene De Beaulieu July 27, 2020 at 12:22 PM Hello Eve Roper, I find this poem romantic. Enjoy your day my friend.

Panagiota Romios July 27, 2020 at 10:45 AM I am so moved by your creation, Eve, Good luck..,we are both in Brian's contest,)) Love the form you chose Panagiota

Vladislav Raven July 27, 2020 at 6:25 AM Hi Eve, this is such a wonderful write from your golden pen. It does not seem as if it is an easy form to do. You give the whole piece a beautiful flow. Have a wonderful Monday. Hugs....Mike. XX

Heidi Sands July 27, 2020 at 5:36 AM Beautiful poem Eve :)

Demetrios Trifiatis July 27, 2020 at 1:25 AM Mesmerizing dearest, Eve! So mastfurly done! Hugs xxx