Eve Roper Poet Free verse

Romantic Breath

steadfast soft stars aloft 
in somber amours' mood,
a mere romantic breath 
following in silence. 
hued lambent music plays 
subdued by patient love 
not easily shooed away.
a kiss, a kiss, numb, hum
lust in a trice of time. 
a wild chime inward braid 
intimate desire hold unfolds, 
whilst a breath sighs of sails 
billowing across dark 
freckled celestial waves.


6/14/2020

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Brenda Chiri August 1, 2020 at 3:58 PM Eve gorgeous congrats on your win!:)

Aditi Mishra July 29, 2020 at 12:51 AM Back to say I already love this intricately crafted muse of soft velvet emotions. Congratulations on your win my friend :) Much love!

William Kelii Kekaula July 28, 2020 at 11:26 PM I love how you choose such eloquent words, Eve, and my compliments on your well deserved 1st Place win, my friend -- Aloha~@William

Aditi Mishra June 17, 2020 at 6:42 AM This is really soothing Eve. Blessings and love :)

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders June 15, 2020 at 9:42 PM Beautifully done, Eve, so soft and romantic! Blessings, Rhonda xx

Andrea Dietrich June 15, 2020 at 3:37 PM very creative imagery in your soft lovely lines here, Eve!

Nette Onclaud June 14, 2020 at 8:01 PM beguiling to say the least, eve... spill ink!...huggs

Demetrios Trifiatis June 14, 2020 at 2:29 PM Outstanding dearest, Eve! A jewel of a poem! Hugs xxx

Regina Mcintosh June 14, 2020 at 12:08 PM Exceptional write. Love it and you, Blessings sweet lady, Gina

Arturo Michael June 14, 2020 at 11:53 AM Love the imagery at the end,"a breath sighs of sails billowing across dark freckled celestial waves."