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Romantic Breath

steadfast soft stars aloft in somber amours' mood, a mere romantic breath following in silence. hued lambent music plays subdued by patient love not easily shooed away. a kiss, a kiss, numb, hum lust in a trice of time. a wild chime inward braid intimate desire hold unfolds, whilst a breath sighs of sails billowing across dark freckled celestial waves. 6/14/2020

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Date: 8/1/2020 3:58:00 PM
Eve gorgeous congrats on your win!:)
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Date: 7/29/2020 12:51:00 AM
Back to say I already love this intricately crafted muse of soft velvet emotions. Congratulations on your win my friend :) Much love!
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Date: 7/28/2020 11:26:00 PM
I love how you choose such eloquent words, Eve, and my compliments on your well deserved 1st Place win, my friend -- Aloha~@William
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Date: 6/17/2020 6:42:00 AM
This is really soothing Eve. Blessings and love :)
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Date: 6/15/2020 9:42:00 PM
Beautifully done, Eve, so soft and romantic! Blessings, Rhonda xx
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Date: 6/15/2020 3:37:00 PM
very creative imagery in your soft lovely lines here, Eve!
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Date: 6/14/2020 8:01:00 PM
beguiling to say the least, eve... spill ink!...huggs
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Date: 6/14/2020 2:29:00 PM
Outstanding dearest, Eve! A jewel of a poem! Hugs xxx
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Date: 6/14/2020 12:08:00 PM
Exceptional write. Love it and you, Blessings sweet lady, Gina
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Date: 6/14/2020 11:53:00 AM
Love the imagery at the end,"a breath sighs of sails billowing across dark freckled celestial waves."
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