Romantic

Rarely have I seen a night so deep -
Open heavens beckon us to come
Make the stars our own before we sleep
As night jasmine turns the senses numb.
Never have I felt a love like this.
To live at this sweet moment in time
Is my first taste of an earthly bliss.
Catch that beam and count this night sublime.

2/17/18
For contest Romantic - Acrostic for John Hamilton
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Duet Avatar
February 26, 2018 at 7:36 PM
Very romantic ...love it!
Bradfield Avatar
February 27, 2018 at 7:36 AM
Thank you, Carole!
Allison Avatar
February 22, 2018 at 5:22 AM
lovely and romantic and I love the rhyme:-) many congratulations on you win:-) hugs Jan xx
Bradfield Avatar
February 27, 2018 at 7:36 AM
Thanks, Jan
Smith Avatar
February 20, 2018 at 11:33 AM
Well done Larry, congratulations...
Bradfield Avatar
February 27, 2018 at 7:36 AM
Thanks, as always, Charlie
Gauthier Avatar
February 18, 2018 at 2:10 PM
Very romantic, Larry. Congrats on your fine win.
Bradfield Avatar
February 27, 2018 at 7:37 AM
Thank you, Line
Hamilton Avatar
February 18, 2018 at 1:36 PM
So sweet Larry congrats on a fine winning placement!
Bradfield Avatar
February 27, 2018 at 7:37 AM
Thanks, John
Gupta Avatar
February 17, 2018 at 11:57 PM
Lovely Acrostic ... Quite romantic ...
Bradfield Avatar
February 27, 2018 at 7:37 AM
Thank you, sir!
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