Romani Proverb

Wading in the river, shining hook wrapped, the flyfisherman casts
but the fish just stare at his lure, for a fly does not enter a closed mouth.

At the breakfast table everyone passes the pitcher of cream.
Mother puts a napkin over the top, for a fly does not enter a closed mouth.

Flying down the freeway, motorcycle roaring
we have our helmets on, for a fly doesn’t enter a closed mouth. 

Daddy puts his sons before him asking about the mess.
The brothers just look at each other, for a fly doesn’t enter a closed mouth.

The bridesmaid isn’t smiling for the bride, when they say ‘I do’;
she’s stifling a giggle, for a fly does not enter a closed mouth.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Kaike Avatar
November 21, 2019 at 7:10 AM
This is a good one. But the opening/first couplet should always rhyme as a ghazal. None the less, it's beautiful.
Lamoureux Avatar
September 27, 2019 at 10:17 AM
I think this should do well in the contest. Well done.
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