Romance Unexpressed

Romantic love unexpressed, A silent strife, Held close throughout A guarded life, It holds a beauty, Soft,and deep, A special charm, Secrets keep.

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Tom Woody

Date: 2/18/2025 8:40:00 AM

Yeah but it can be lonely. Romantic feelings are always best expressed, even when rejection is a possibility

Akham Nilabirdhwaja Singh
Date: 2/19/2025 3:02:00 AM

Thank you.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 2/18/2025 5:20:00 AM

So interesting! The guarded life still appreciates the beauty with charm, soft and deep!

Akham Nilabirdhwaja Singh
Date: 2/19/2025 3:01:00 AM

Thank you

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/13/2025 4:36:00 PM

I adore a short little poem like this filled with so much meaning. A fave !

Akham Nilabirdhwaja Singh
Date: 2/13/2025 7:22:00 PM

Thank you so much

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 2/13/2025 6:14:00 AM

Clever and to the point.

Akham Nilabirdhwaja Singh
Date: 2/13/2025 6:38:00 AM

Thank you.

Hilda Greenhough

Date: 2/12/2025 12:39:00 PM

Love has many faces. Proof of love comes in many forms. Maybe it's not words. Maybe it's chicken soup. I really enjoy your poem. It says so much.

Akham Nilabirdhwaja Singh
Date: 2/12/2025 7:19:00 PM

Thanks for your nice comment

Ink Empress

Date: 2/12/2025 4:33:00 AM

Dear akham, the tenderness of your love unexpressed that remains so firm and sincere so well youv expressed here in just few words, the silent strife and heaviness too of not being able to express. A seamless write so well delivered. Pleasure reading. Sending you light always

Akham Nilabirdhwaja Singh
Date: 2/12/2025 4:59:00 AM

Thank you for your beautiful comment.