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Romance of Tendrils

Bubbling up the tendrils of the inflamable cups Filled to the brim with the dense brown odour Of the maddeningly reddening valentine tulips Surrender your sonnet to the unbending burglar Romantic Charm in four lines - Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Silent One

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Line Gauthier

Date: 2/18/2018 2:47:00 PM

Congrats on your witty win, Probir.

Probir Gupta
Date: 2/18/2018 10:30:00 PM

Thank you, Line ...

Charlie Smith

Date: 2/17/2018 11:10:00 AM

Loved the last line Probir, congratulations...

Probir Gupta
Date: 2/17/2018 9:14:00 PM

Thanks, Charlie ...

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/15/2018 6:18:00 PM

ohhh, what a clever phrase, the unbending burglar. Congrats on your win with this fine charm.

Probir Gupta
Date: 2/15/2018 9:44:00 PM

Thank you, Andrea ... You may like my Indian Ocean too in the Romantic Acrostic ...

Freddie Robinson Jr.

Date: 2/15/2018 3:04:00 PM

Very romantic imagery poured from your golden pen, Probir. You are so cosmically in tune w/life. Another fine write. Love and peace always.

Probir Gupta
Date: 2/15/2018 9:45:00 PM

I am honoured, Freddie ...

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 2/14/2018 11:55:00 AM

- Congratulations on yor lovely & romantic poem, Probir - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Probir Gupta
Date: 2/15/2018 12:14:00 AM

Thank you, Sunshine ...

Alexis Y.

Date: 2/14/2018 9:13:00 AM

Hi Probir, I'm just coming back to say congratulations on your winning write. PS, Happy Valentine's Day:-) Alexis

Probir Gupta
Date: 2/15/2018 12:16:00 AM

Thank you, Alexis ...

Silent One

Date: 2/14/2018 8:42:00 AM

The first line is very interesting, you have some good romantic metaphors here.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..

Probir Gupta
Date: 2/15/2018 12:17:00 AM

Thank you so much, Silent ....

Vijay Pandit

Date: 2/14/2018 6:54:00 AM

Lovely imagery..best for a win, Probir.

Probir Gupta
Date: 2/15/2018 12:18:00 AM

Thank you, Vijay ...

Supraja Kannan

Date: 2/14/2018 12:22:00 AM

Awesome poetry... So beautifully written... Reads like a winner....

Probir Gupta
Date: 2/15/2018 12:19:00 AM

Thank you very much ...

Alexis Y.

Date: 2/13/2018 11:17:00 PM

WoW! Phobir, This is a good offering for the contest. These four lines are exceptionally charming. I wish you the best of luck in the contest:-) Alexis

Probir Gupta
Date: 2/15/2018 12:21:00 AM

Thank you, Alexis ...