Probir Gupta Poet Rhyme

Romance of Tendrils

Bubbling up the tendrils of the inflamable cups

Filled to the brim with the dense brown odour

Of the maddeningly reddening valentine tulips

Surrender your sonnet to the unbending burglar



Romantic Charm in four lines - Poetry Contest 
Sponsored by: Silent One

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Line Gauthier February 18, 2018 at 2:47 PM Congrats on your witty win, Probir. Probir Gupta February 18, 2018 at 10:30 PM Thank you, Line ...

Charlie Smith February 17, 2018 at 11:10 AM Loved the last line Probir, congratulations... Probir Gupta February 17, 2018 at 9:14 PM Thanks, Charlie ...

Andrea Dietrich February 15, 2018 at 6:18 PM ohhh, what a clever phrase, the unbending burglar. Congrats on your win with this fine charm. Probir Gupta February 15, 2018 at 9:44 PM Thank you, Andrea ... You may like my Indian Ocean too in the Romantic Acrostic ...

Freddie Robinson Jr. February 15, 2018 at 3:04 PM Very romantic imagery poured from your golden pen, Probir. You are so cosmically in tune w/life. Another fine write. Love and peace always. Probir Gupta February 15, 2018 at 9:45 PM I am honoured, Freddie ...

Anne-Lise Andresen February 14, 2018 at 11:55 AM - Congratulations on yor lovely & romantic poem, Probir - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Probir Gupta February 15, 2018 at 12:14 AM Thank you, Sunshine ...

Alexis Y. February 14, 2018 at 9:13 AM Hi Probir, I'm just coming back to say congratulations on your winning write. PS, Happy Valentine's Day:-) Alexis Probir Gupta February 15, 2018 at 12:16 AM Thank you, Alexis ...

Silent One February 14, 2018 at 8:42 AM The first line is very interesting, you have some good romantic metaphors here.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest.. Probir Gupta February 15, 2018 at 12:17 AM Thank you so much, Silent ....

Vijay Pandit February 14, 2018 at 6:54 AM Lovely imagery..best for a win, Probir. Probir Gupta February 15, 2018 at 12:18 AM Thank you, Vijay ...

Supraja Kannan February 14, 2018 at 12:22 AM Awesome poetry... So beautifully written... Reads like a winner.... Probir Gupta February 15, 2018 at 12:19 AM Thank you very much ...

Alexis Y. February 13, 2018 at 11:17 PM WoW! Phobir, This is a good offering for the contest. These four lines are exceptionally charming. I wish you the best of luck in the contest:-) Alexis Probir Gupta February 15, 2018 at 12:21 AM Thank you, Alexis ...