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Romance In Spring

A serene place is an early spring The peach and willows bloomed together The shiver of the cold streams Ran and woke the mood romantic. There i saw a masterpiece No painters painted, no poets expressed That nature all alone with grace Provoked my witness to her art. I saw her eyes on the glance of her smiles I saw her shy on the whites of her face Blush with the red that my eyes can take Hidden with the heart of her fears from the past. Lovely to eyes, lovable to heart So true not witch or wizards can disguise A Common form but simply divine Wrote to my heart like read from a rhyme. She speaks to my ear what i love to hear Makes me wait in a joy impatient If time slips fast, so fast with her How many days will FOREVER last?

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Beata Agustin

Date: 3/20/2024 2:57:00 AM

Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.

Suk Raj Darjee

Date: 8/11/2021 8:37:00 PM

"Romance in Spring A serene place is an early spring The peach and willows bloomed together The shiver of the cold streams Ran and woke the mood romantic. There i saw a masterpiece No painters painted, no poets expressed That nature all alone with grace Provoked my witness to her art. I saw her eyes on the glance of her smiles I saw her shy on the whites of her face Blush with the red that my eyes can take Hidden with the heart of her fears from the past. Lovely to eyes, lovable to heart So true not witch or wizards can disguise A Common form but simply divine Wrote to my heart like read from a rhyme. She speaks to my ear what i love to hear Makes me wait in a joy impatient If time slips fast, so fast with her How many days will FOREVER last? " Wonderful weaved adorned with emotive phrases. A great way of expressing with the finest flow. Love it!