Rolling Storms

Resounding thunder,
Brilliant energy flashing,
Static discharging.

Nathan Bane Leccese
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Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Suzadail Jr. Avatar
June 18, 2009 at 1:35 PM
Nothing like a Summer Storm and the ozone afterwards. Vince
Goff Avatar
June 16, 2009 at 1:46 PM
yes!! I really like this effect in Northern Minnesota! It seems to amplify!! great haiku!! jim
Eckiwaudah Avatar
June 6, 2009 at 7:28 PM
nice.
Neshat Avatar
June 5, 2009 at 6:27 PM
like it.
Bird Avatar
June 5, 2009 at 5:53 PM
I love this Nathan and I love storms. I can almost here the thunder and smell the rain.
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June 5, 2009 at 2:20 PM
Nice use of imagery. Good last line. Keep on writing! Karen
Carty Avatar
June 5, 2009 at 2:03 PM
wow to this! Very dramatic.
Devonshire Avatar
June 5, 2009 at 1:15 PM
Electrifying poetry, Nate! Score another one for the prince. Love, Carolyn
Higgins Avatar
June 5, 2009 at 12:25 PM
Awesome haiku..love that last line.
Fraser Avatar
June 5, 2009 at 11:40 AM
Poetry and physics in the one lesson, just awesome Nathan>James
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