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Rolling Storms

Resounding thunder, Brilliant energy flashing, Static discharging. Nathan Bane Leccese ©All Rights Reserved 06/05/09

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 6/18/2009 1:35:00 PM
Nothing like a Summer Storm and the ozone afterwards. Vince
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Date: 6/16/2009 1:46:00 PM
yes!! I really like this effect in Northern Minnesota! It seems to amplify!! great haiku!! jim
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Date: 6/6/2009 7:28:00 PM
nice.
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Date: 6/5/2009 6:27:00 PM
like it.
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Date: 6/5/2009 5:53:00 PM
I love this Nathan and I love storms. I can almost here the thunder and smell the rain.
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Date: 6/5/2009 2:20:00 PM
Nice use of imagery. Good last line. Keep on writing! Karen
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Date: 6/5/2009 2:03:00 PM
wow to this! Very dramatic.
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Date: 6/5/2009 1:15:00 PM
Electrifying poetry, Nate! Score another one for the prince. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 6/5/2009 12:25:00 PM
Awesome haiku..love that last line.
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Date: 6/5/2009 11:40:00 AM
Poetry and physics in the one lesson, just awesome Nathan>James
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