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Rollercoaster

You build me up, You burn me down, Like a rollercoaster going round, round and round and round we go Will we stop? No-one knows. Feeling. Weeping. Tearing. Screaming. Faster and faster and faster I go. Will I stop? No-one knows. You pull me up, you tear me down, Like a rollercoaster going round.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 3/31/2016 6:55:00 PM
Alicia, wow, that was a great spin... Love LINDA
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Date: 3/31/2016 4:59:00 AM
Lovely piece, like the way the words carry the rythm.
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Date: 3/31/2016 5:06:00 AM
Hi Barry. Thank you much, really appreciate it!

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