Rollercoaster

You build me up,
You burn me down,
Like a rollercoaster going round,
round and round and round we go
Will we stop?
No-one knows.
Feeling.
Weeping.
Tearing.
Screaming.
Faster and faster and faster I go.
Will I stop?
No-one knows.
You pull me up, you tear me down,
Like a rollercoaster going round.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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A   Avatar
March 31, 2016 at 6:55 PM
Alicia, wow, that was a great spin... Love LINDA
Stebbings Avatar
March 31, 2016 at 4:59 AM
Lovely piece, like the way the words carry the rythm.
K  Avatar
March 31, 2016 at 5:06 AM
Hi Barry. Thank you much, really appreciate it!
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