Eve Roper Poet Rhyme

Roller Coaster Ride On Mountain Bikes

On gravel mountain path,
    underneath shadowed pine crowns: friends ride mountain bikes,
      where none hath
        neath sapphire sky.
  Roller coaster, fun lighting strikes,
    runs bye.
  Wearing
    down bends, turnpikes,
      in
  swooping dust inward wrath.
    Their enlivening heartbeat spikes.
      Win!


4/3/2022

  Minichu 

6 12 3 -4 8 2 -2 4 1 – 6 8 1
Aba, cBc, dbD, ABD.

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Caren Krutsinger April 5, 2022 at 11:26 AM So gorgeously done; great contrast!

Panagiota Romios April 4, 2022 at 5:42 AM Absolutely beautiful. The comparison between Mountain paths and roller coasters is truly unique best wishes my friend. Pangie 5:30 am pst

Victor Buhagiar April 3, 2022 at 11:21 PM Can't say I like the syllable invention. However you di a great job with it. I could visualize the ride on high places/ Best for a win.