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Roller Coaster Ride On Mountain Bikes

On gravel mountain path, underneath shadowed pine crowns: friends ride mountain bikes, where none hath neath sapphire sky. Roller coaster, fun lighting strikes, runs bye. Wearing down bends, turnpikes, in swooping dust inward wrath. Their enlivening heartbeat spikes. Win! 4/3/2022 Minichu 6 12 3 -4 8 2 -2 4 1 – 6 8 1 Aba, cBc, dbD, ABD.

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Date: 4/5/2022 11:26:00 AM
So gorgeously done; great contrast!
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Date: 4/4/2022 5:42:00 AM
Absolutely beautiful. The comparison between Mountain paths and roller coasters is truly unique best wishes my friend. Pangie 5:30 am pst
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Date: 4/3/2022 11:21:00 PM
Can't say I like the syllable invention. However you di a great job with it. I could visualize the ride on high places/ Best for a win.
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