Rolled My Eyes Too Loud

Sorry, did I roll my eyes too loud Happened before the roads were plowed My eyeballs were Covered in fur From our pet Golden who is quite a grouch
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Hicks Avatar
May 12, 2020 at 7:38 PM
"rolled my eyes too loud" now, that's a really funny line ... so much sass. Haha. Afraid I don't really understand where the rest of the poem was going (was your dog sitting on your face, is that why whey were covered in fur??) Maybe I'm dense, or you're crazy (or could be a mix of both?)
Ellison Avatar
May 13, 2020 at 6:19 AM
"Afraid I don't really understand where the rest of the poem was going"... me too! It's a mix of both I assume!
Cunningham Avatar
May 12, 2020 at 7:51 AM
Did they make a grinding noise ?
Ellison Avatar
May 12, 2020 at 8:06 AM
Absolutely!!! Makes me cringe though! Good day, my friend!
Pigeon Tart Avatar
May 12, 2020 at 7:14 AM
Now I know this is fiction. Your Goldy ain't grouchy! As for fur, it's a staple in my diet. ;p xomo!
Ellison Avatar
May 12, 2020 at 7:54 AM
Yea BONKERS! Methinks we have both lost ours!
Pigeon Tart Avatar
May 12, 2020 at 7:47 AM
Ooh brain fart! Bonkers, that's what we called the supersized marbles, here I thought we lost ours! SWEET!
Ellison Avatar
May 12, 2020 at 7:32 AM
You is as bonkers as this old geezer! But I love ya! Kissy kissy! XOX
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