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Rolled My Eyes Too Loud

Sorry, did I roll my eyes too loud Happened before the roads were plowed My eyeballs were Covered in fur From our pet Golden who is quite a grouch

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Date: 5/12/2020 7:38:00 PM
"rolled my eyes too loud" now, that's a really funny line ... so much sass. Haha. Afraid I don't really understand where the rest of the poem was going (was your dog sitting on your face, is that why whey were covered in fur??) Maybe I'm dense, or you're crazy (or could be a mix of both?)
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Jack Ellison
Date: 5/13/2020 6:19:00 AM
"Afraid I don't really understand where the rest of the poem was going"... me too! It's a mix of both I assume!
Date: 5/12/2020 7:51:00 AM
Did they make a grinding noise ?
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Jack Ellison
Date: 5/12/2020 8:06:00 AM
Absolutely!!! Makes me cringe though! Good day, my friend!
Date: 5/12/2020 7:14:00 AM
Now I know this is fiction. Your Goldy ain't grouchy! As for fur, it's a staple in my diet. ;p xomo!
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Jack Ellison
Date: 5/12/2020 7:54:00 AM
Yea BONKERS! Methinks we have both lost ours!
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Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 5/12/2020 7:47:00 AM
Ooh brain fart! Bonkers, that's what we called the supersized marbles, here I thought we lost ours! SWEET!
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Jack Ellison
Date: 5/12/2020 7:32:00 AM
You is as bonkers as this old geezer! But I love ya! Kissy kissy! XOX

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