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In existence, select the path to follow. This is the most pivotal choice of your life. Will merely delay or endure things to rife. Roll the dice and check if you hit or are hollow. Every day is grand, life allows a raw leaf. You'll gaze at how other wanders to our pile. Over time, we agonize over hope for a smile. Why worry about fate, life books, joy or grief? Fitfully, I need to shout a present tale a day. If this occurs, on our page, bestow a prize. How could this arise with no tears or sights? Therefore, if it's deliberate or not, wish it may. Could it be evil luck? I care about savory? I'm still bearing a lot and becoming older. Each day's tale is over success or failure. In eager days or bane, we may pray for glory. I learned late that hope conveys might. To live hastily or slowly or meet strife. My tale ends fearfully of hailing the rife. Oh God, I am daunted; our life is a plight.
Written: November 15, 2022 The Crap Shoot #2 Poetry Contest Sponsored by: John lawless

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Date: 11/17/2022 12:34:00 PM
Our life is a plight but there is the awesome, great and good along the way for sure to help keep it savory. I enjoyed reading this one today. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara
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Date: 11/16/2022 4:34:00 PM
I'm not sure many ever understand life the way I'd like too. Each of us has their own level of curiosity. Choice are often made with little or no knowledge of the situation. Aging is a real puzzler for me. Things are drastically changing in my life and I'm not sure who I am at times. I enjoyed your poem, Lasaad. Write On! Bill
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Date: 11/16/2022 10:20:00 AM
A philosophical approach to life that is complicated by the roll of the dice. Admirable writing, my dearest friend, Lasaad. Be blessed!
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Date: 11/16/2022 8:32:00 AM
You get a good roll or bad roll with every roll of the dice...we should skip a few rolls every time good rolls tumble by. Nicely written, Lasaad. Best wishes in the contest, my friend!
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Date: 11/16/2022 5:39:00 AM
Enlightening commentary on choices one makes, my friend.
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Date: 11/16/2022 12:06:00 AM
Don't gamble with life.
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