Roll on spring

bells peeling loudly
red dray gracious in tree tops
while blue jays frame the shot     

pure crystal stars shine
translucent hues lighten sky
black water glinting

Fat cat drinking milk
roosters square up feathers fly
cow steps over wall
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Dietrich Avatar
January 31, 2024 at 11:00 PM
I agree with Bill. Excellent imAgery . I really like how you describe animals
Baker Avatar
January 27, 2024 at 9:58 PM
Excellent imagery, Shadow. I feel like I just got back from a trip to the farm. Nice string of haiku, my friend. Smiles ~ Blessings Bill
One Avatar
January 25, 2024 at 12:02 PM
There haiku full of vivid imagery.. I hope you are well..
Hamilton Avatar
January 25, 2024 at 1:04 PM
doing ok SO pain can be bad but doc has moved me to morphine which will help hugs Shadow
Poet Avatar
January 25, 2024 at 6:57 AM
The poem seems to be a serene and peaceful portrayal of nature and everyday life on a farm. It revolves around the beautiful imagery of bells ringing, birds flying, stars shining, animals drinking and interacting, and the peacefulness of the surroundings. Hope you're well Shadow
Hamilton Avatar
January 25, 2024 at 8:11 AM
hi Sotto doing ok leg playing up cant sleep for pain yes I had not thought of it that way but could well be countryside hugs Shadow
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