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Roll on spring

bells peeling loudly red dray gracious in tree tops while blue jays frame the shot pure crystal stars shine translucent hues lighten sky black water glinting Fat cat drinking milk roosters square up feathers fly cow steps over wall

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/31/2024 11:00:00 PM

I agree with Bill. Excellent imAgery . I really like how you describe animals

Bill Baker

Date: 1/27/2024 9:58:00 PM

Excellent imagery, Shadow. I feel like I just got back from a trip to the farm. Nice string of haiku, my friend. Smiles ~ Blessings Bill

Silent One

Date: 1/25/2024 12:02:00 PM

There haiku full of vivid imagery.. I hope you are well..

Shadow Hamilton
Date: 1/25/2024 1:04:00 PM

doing ok SO pain can be bad but doc has moved me to morphine which will help hugs Shadow

Sotto Poet

Date: 1/25/2024 6:57:00 AM

The poem seems to be a serene and peaceful portrayal of nature and everyday life on a farm. It revolves around the beautiful imagery of bells ringing, birds flying, stars shining, animals drinking and interacting, and the peacefulness of the surroundings. Hope you're well Shadow

Shadow Hamilton
Date: 1/25/2024 8:11:00 AM

hi Sotto doing ok leg playing up cant sleep for pain yes I had not thought of it that way but could well be countryside hugs Shadow