Jan Allison Poet Free verse

Role Reversal

I knelt down and did up her zipper -
Mum struggles with her sight you see
She kissed me gently on the top of my head 
and said
 ‘things I did for you as a child ...
now you do for me’



12th April

The above happened yesterday - I am on massive emotional roller coaster with mum at the moment 3 amazing days and today she’s not so good and I’m struggling with the emotions

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Darren Watson April 13, 2014 at 7:36 PM If it were not for your mum , I wouldn't have the wonderful friend I now have , So I send my love to both of you and sincere hopes for better days ahead . Jan Allison April 13, 2014 at 7:42 PM Thanks for getting me through a bad time - such an emotional couple of days. If it wasn't for Jenny Brewer we would never have met - will tell you the story of how I got on here one day. Hugs Jan x

Monterey Sirak April 13, 2014 at 6:23 AM Oh, my, this is tender, loving, and so sad. The role reversal is never easy to deal with. Jan Allison April 13, 2014 at 6:28 AM Thanks Monterey for the lovely comment - not only is she losing her sight but she has early dementia - am struggling at the moment emotionally so just had to get this down on paper. Hoping for brighter days to come. Hugs Jan x

Tim Smith April 12, 2014 at 6:00 PM Role reversal is one of the hardest things in life. My prayers are with you Jan....Big hug Tim Jan Allison April 12, 2014 at 6:03 PM Tough times aren't they Tim - both of us for different reasons - doesn't usually get me down but this was so touching it broke my heart. I just try to let them both retain as much dignity as possible Hugs Jan xxx

Jack Horne April 12, 2014 at 4:22 PM tender but heartbreaking write, my friend. I hope she has more amazing days than bad. Sending you a hug x Jan Allison April 12, 2014 at 4:27 PM Thanks Jack what is going on in our lives reminds me of Shakespeare's 7ages of man poem - just hope tomorrow is a better day for both of us. Hugs Jan x