Role Model

In his defense
Identical footprints
Which were never meant to be traced
Impressionable eyes
Often disguised
Longing to suffer a taste
Following the lead
Of his same seed
Mimics the brother he idols
Their fatal mistake
Discussed at the wake
Where torrential eyes were unbridled
The older offspring
Choked by the rings
Decades before the event
The shadows that passed
Wearing a mask
Escaped with the fortunes they'd spent

               In memory of my brother: Stop Smoking
       an original poem by the "poemdog" Daniel Turner
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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La France Avatar
January 17, 2016 at 9:37 AM
Daniel, this is a skillfully and sadly beautiful write, oh that darn smoking is a killer, I am loving this 7 and welcome to poetry soup ~
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January 17, 2016 at 9:46 AM
I am honored that you took the time to read and comment and thank you for the flowers.
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