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Rodentia

You are a rodent
                                                      to a snake if you walk in
                                                              its territory.
  



Pace, G
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05-10-2012

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Doreen Wright Date: 8/12/2012 11:49:00 PM Oh MAN!!!!!!!!!!!! WOWOWOW!!! Smh...what a poem...what a poet. Plain and simple. I enjoyed the MESSAGE not the reference to those creatures lol! Xoxoxoxo Login to Reply

Poet Destroyer A Date: 7/24/2012 7:45:00 PM I'M WAITING TO EXHALE........ PD Login to Reply

Poet Destroyer A Date: 6/27/2012 4:49:00 PM ekkk ekk,,,,I'm running...I hate them snakes... back to my TT.... always..PD Login to Reply

Kathryn Collins Date: 6/18/2012 12:29:00 PM Oh gosh, your haiku is sublime. Login to Reply

Justcallme Britt Date: 6/9/2012 9:32:00 AM Your haiku's have SO much depth in their briefness! Looking forward to reading more <3 Login to Reply Pace Ink-U-Script Date: 6/11/2012 11:03:00 AM Thank you for sharing with me!!

Sara Kendrick Date: 6/2/2012 2:04:00 PM This one is right..Enjoyed reading this afternoon..Thanks for stopping by my work..I appreciate you taking the time to read and comment..Sara Login to Reply Pace Ink-U-Script Date: 6/2/2012 2:08:00 PM No, thank you Sara!! Hugs

Janet Vick Date: 6/2/2012 11:59:00 AM No doubt. My husband has a snake phobia, so any snake handling is left to me. Take care. Janet Login to Reply Pace Ink-U-Script Date: 6/2/2012 12:18:00 PM Lol..I won't be handling any snakes anytime soon..you have them all.

Sean L Sanders Date: 6/2/2012 11:17:00 AM Nicely done poet Login to Reply Pace Ink-U-Script Date: 6/2/2012 12:15:00 PM Thank you Sean!! Glad to have you come by..as I indeed love your work.

Carma Sanderson Date: 6/1/2012 11:22:00 PM Love the hummor! Carma Login to Reply Pace Ink-U-Script Date: 6/2/2012 12:23:00 AM Thank-you Carma!! Hugs

Karen Deeks Date: 5/31/2012 5:10:00 PM the more i read the more my mind expands.. love this site and the different genres and writes...this write feels very instinctual and enticing..tyvm karen...ex owner of a snake.. i kid you not lol and he kept trying to eat my leg :) Login to Reply Pace Ink-U-Script Date: 5/31/2012 5:24:00 PM Oh no maam!! I will not own a snake now just for that reason!! lol

Terry O'Leary Date: 5/31/2012 10:45:00 AM Another great Haiku... something to strive for... Terry Login to Reply Pace Ink-U-Script Date: 5/31/2012 1:25:00 PM Thank you dearly Terry!!! hugs

Terry L. Allen Date: 5/22/2012 6:11:00 AM Sounds a bit like turf rules. Neat a Haiku that reads two ways and both quite true. Good job. Huggs TLee Login to Reply Pace Ink-U-Script Date: 5/22/2012 8:54:00 AM Thank you so kindly!!

Nola Perez Date: 5/21/2012 5:43:00 AM I wish I could write such succinct haiku. It works on many levels. Thank you for commenting on my poem. Nola Perez Login to Reply Pace Ink-U-Script Date: 5/21/2012 6:00:00 AM All smiles..thank you!!

Don Johnson Date: 5/20/2012 2:47:00 AM no rodent chirping at the moon, a flash a blur comes tucker soon, ol brown snakes sweet delight... great poem mate...Don Login to Reply Pace Ink-U-Script Date: 5/20/2012 6:26:00 AM Thank you Don!!

Patrick Cornwall Date: 5/18/2012 8:19:00 PM Pace your turning my head to Haiku... excellent>>>Patrick Login to Reply Pace Ink-U-Script Date: 5/18/2012 9:24:00 PM Thank you yet again..please visit more often!!

Andrea Dietrich Date: 5/15/2012 9:35:00 PM coming back to this one again. I sure like it alot. Login to Reply Pace Ink-U-Script Date: 5/15/2012 10:48:00 PM Lol...thank you!!!

Charmaine Chircop Date: 5/15/2012 11:36:00 AM Much said here.. Very clever post.. Charma Login to Reply Pace Ink-U-Script Date: 5/15/2012 12:02:00 PM Hugs!!

Charmaine Chircop Date: 5/15/2012 11:35:00 AM Much said here.. Very clever post.. Charma Login to Reply Pace Ink-U-Script Date: 5/15/2012 12:02:00 PM smiles..thank you!!

Lisa Cooper Date: 5/15/2012 11:32:00 AM lovely Login to Reply Pace Ink-U-Script Date: 5/15/2012 12:01:00 PM Thank you madam!!

Jessica K Date: 5/13/2012 8:57:00 PM Wow, straight foward Haiku. Love it :) Login to Reply Pace Ink-U-Script Date: 5/13/2012 9:59:00 PM Thank you madam!!

Nette Onclaud Date: 5/13/2012 7:44:00 AM you pulled me in, pace.. smashing study of the element-of-surprise approach!... wink!...:) hugggs! Login to Reply Pace Ink-U-Script Date: 5/13/2012 4:59:00 PM Thanks Pace Ink-U-Script Date: 5/13/2012 4:57:00 PM Thanks!! Pace Ink-U-Script Date: 5/13/2012 8:24:00 AM Thank you!! Hugs

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl Date: 5/13/2012 5:46:00 AM It says so much xxx Login to Reply Pace Ink-U-Script Date: 5/13/2012 8:23:00 AM Thank you for your kind comment!!

Michael J. Falotico Date: 5/12/2012 6:59:00 AM WOW my poet brother... I think I shall walk around and watch... Michael Login to Reply Pace Ink-U-Script Date: 5/12/2012 7:13:00 AM Lol..That was funny!!

Laura Breidenthal Date: 5/11/2012 1:40:00 PM NICE! :D Always, Laura Login to Reply Pace Ink-U-Script Date: 5/11/2012 2:31:00 PM Thank you sweetheart!

Joseph May Date: 5/11/2012 11:18:00 AM A real cool Haiku G.....Joseph Login to Reply Pace Ink-U-Script Date: 5/11/2012 12:15:00 PM Thank you Joseph!!

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