Pace Ink-U-Script Poet Haiku

Rodentia

You are a rodent
                                                      to a snake if you walk in
                                                              its territory.
  



Pace, G
INK-U-SCRIPT

05-10-2012

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Doreen Wright August 12, 2012 at 11:49 PM Oh MAN!!!!!!!!!!!! WOWOWOW!!! Smh...what a poem...what a poet. Plain and simple. I enjoyed the MESSAGE not the reference to those creatures lol! Xoxoxoxo

Poet Destroyer A July 24, 2012 at 7:45 PM I'M WAITING TO EXHALE........ PD

Poet Destroyer A June 27, 2012 at 4:49 PM ekkk ekk,,,,I'm running...I hate them snakes... back to my TT.... always..PD

Kathryn Collins June 18, 2012 at 12:29 PM Oh gosh, your haiku is sublime.

Justcallme Britt June 9, 2012 at 9:32 AM Your haiku's have SO much depth in their briefness! Looking forward to reading more <3 Pace Ink-U-Script June 11, 2012 at 11:03 AM Thank you for sharing with me!!

Sara Kendrick June 2, 2012 at 2:04 PM This one is right..Enjoyed reading this afternoon..Thanks for stopping by my work..I appreciate you taking the time to read and comment..Sara Pace Ink-U-Script June 2, 2012 at 2:08 PM No, thank you Sara!! Hugs

Janet Vick June 2, 2012 at 11:59 AM No doubt. My husband has a snake phobia, so any snake handling is left to me. Take care. Janet Pace Ink-U-Script June 2, 2012 at 12:18 PM Lol..I won't be handling any snakes anytime soon..you have them all.

Sean L Sanders June 2, 2012 at 11:17 AM Nicely done poet Pace Ink-U-Script June 2, 2012 at 12:15 PM Thank you Sean!! Glad to have you come by..as I indeed love your work.

Carma Sanderson June 1, 2012 at 11:22 PM Love the hummor! Carma Pace Ink-U-Script June 2, 2012 at 12:23 AM Thank-you Carma!! Hugs

Karen Deeks May 31, 2012 at 5:10 PM the more i read the more my mind expands.. love this site and the different genres and writes...this write feels very instinctual and enticing..tyvm karen...ex owner of a snake.. i kid you not lol and he kept trying to eat my leg :) Pace Ink-U-Script May 31, 2012 at 5:24 PM Oh no maam!! I will not own a snake now just for that reason!! lol

Terry O'Leary May 31, 2012 at 10:45 AM Another great Haiku... something to strive for... Terry Pace Ink-U-Script May 31, 2012 at 1:25 PM Thank you dearly Terry!!! hugs

Terry L. Allen May 22, 2012 at 6:11 AM Sounds a bit like turf rules. Neat a Haiku that reads two ways and both quite true. Good job. Huggs TLee Pace Ink-U-Script May 22, 2012 at 8:54 AM Thank you so kindly!!

Nola Perez May 21, 2012 at 5:43 AM I wish I could write such succinct haiku. It works on many levels. Thank you for commenting on my poem. Nola Perez Pace Ink-U-Script May 21, 2012 at 6:00 AM All smiles..thank you!!

Don Johnson May 20, 2012 at 2:47 AM no rodent chirping at the moon, a flash a blur comes tucker soon, ol brown snakes sweet delight... great poem mate...Don Pace Ink-U-Script May 20, 2012 at 6:26 AM Thank you Don!!

Patrick Cornwall May 18, 2012 at 8:19 PM Pace your turning my head to Haiku... excellent>>>Patrick Pace Ink-U-Script May 18, 2012 at 9:24 PM Thank you yet again..please visit more often!!

Andrea Dietrich May 15, 2012 at 9:35 PM coming back to this one again. I sure like it alot. Pace Ink-U-Script May 15, 2012 at 10:48 PM Lol...thank you!!!

Charmaine Chircop May 15, 2012 at 11:36 AM Much said here.. Very clever post.. Charma Pace Ink-U-Script May 15, 2012 at 12:02 PM Hugs!!

Charmaine Chircop May 15, 2012 at 11:35 AM Much said here.. Very clever post.. Charma Pace Ink-U-Script May 15, 2012 at 12:02 PM smiles..thank you!!

Lisa Cooper May 15, 2012 at 11:32 AM lovely Pace Ink-U-Script May 15, 2012 at 12:01 PM Thank you madam!!

Jessica K May 13, 2012 at 8:57 PM Wow, straight foward Haiku. Love it :) Pace Ink-U-Script May 13, 2012 at 9:59 PM Thank you madam!!

Nette Onclaud May 13, 2012 at 7:44 AM you pulled me in, pace.. smashing study of the element-of-surprise approach!... wink!...:) hugggs! Pace Ink-U-Script May 13, 2012 at 4:59 PM Thanks Pace Ink-U-Script May 13, 2012 at 4:57 PM Thanks!! Pace Ink-U-Script May 13, 2012 at 8:24 AM Thank you!! Hugs

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl May 13, 2012 at 5:46 AM It says so much xxx Pace Ink-U-Script May 13, 2012 at 8:23 AM Thank you for your kind comment!!

Michael J. Falotico May 12, 2012 at 6:59 AM WOW my poet brother... I think I shall walk around and watch... Michael Pace Ink-U-Script May 12, 2012 at 7:13 AM Lol..That was funny!!

Laura Breidenthal May 11, 2012 at 1:40 PM NICE! :D Always, Laura Pace Ink-U-Script May 11, 2012 at 2:31 PM Thank you sweetheart!

Joseph May May 11, 2012 at 11:18 AM A real cool Haiku G.....Joseph Pace Ink-U-Script May 11, 2012 at 12:15 PM Thank you Joseph!!

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