Carolyn Devonshire Poet Rhyme

Rocky Mountain Visit

Rocky Mountains tower in God’s sun 
Their splendor captured in photos
Below wild stallions make a run
Putting on such fun-filled air shows

Silhouettes of birds passing by
I call to them, but remain unheard
Now I too feel free enough to fly
But looking down, by fear I’m deterred


*For Shaz Cheesman's "50 Word" contest

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James Fraser May 24, 2014 at 8:27 AM Fifty words when I read I heard. The Rocky Mountains have a certain lure and beauty. Nice short piece Carolyn, James :)

Kash Poet September 20, 2012 at 9:04 AM Thanks a lot!!

Kash Poet September 20, 2012 at 9:03 AM Yeaahhh!A comment from you!!I am so happy!!

Daver Austin June 6, 2012 at 3:07 PM You got a "Rocky Mountain High." This photo manages to fly. Love, it. daver

Anne-Lise Andresen June 5, 2012 at 12:30 PM Look up Carolyn...look up... never down...:) :) - Very well written, lovely. - Luck to you in contest! - oxox love Anne-Lise

Russell Sivey June 5, 2012 at 12:09 PM Wow, you were not restricted by just 50 words! You went out and flew up and above and wrote a fabulous write with your incredible talent you bestow! I simply love your grandiose poem that you have written my friend! You will do well in the contest! Great Work!!

Funom Makama June 5, 2012 at 11:58 AM wonderfully written with pure skill and craft. I like your words the unique sequence they use to bring out the meaning of your poem.