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Rock N Roll

The river rolled over the rocks Moving in a spirited motion Rock n roll through the valley The mountains danced above Heidi Sands 9/28/21

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Caren Krutsinger

Date: 9/30/2021 11:46:00 AM

Ah such imagery!

Heidi Sands
Date: 9/30/2021 12:22:00 PM

Thank you Caren :)

Mike Gentile

Date: 9/30/2021 6:41:00 AM

I love the last line Heidi especially in the musical metaphor!! Happy Thursday!

Heidi Sands
Date: 9/30/2021 10:22:00 AM

Thank you Mike! I hope all is well. Happy Thursday :)

Brian Strand

Date: 9/29/2021 6:38:00 AM

Nothing 'beats' better Heidi

Heidi Sands
Date: 9/29/2021 7:56:00 AM

Thank you Brian :)

Sotto Poet

Date: 9/29/2021 4:43:00 AM

This wonderful quatrain was a pleasure to read, Heidi. River in motion is depicted in this dynamic imagery.

Heidi Sands
Date: 9/29/2021 7:57:00 AM

Thabk you very much Lasaad :)

Vijay Pandit

Date: 9/28/2021 1:42:00 PM

Dynamic imagery of river in motion, Heidi.

Heidi Sands
Date: 9/28/2021 2:25:00 PM

Thank you Vijay. I hope you have a nice evening :)

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 9/28/2021 12:15:00 PM

Hello Heidi, as I reading this poem I could vision this scene. Hugs.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 9/29/2021 10:13:00 AM

Hello Heidi, we both saw it. Hugs.

Heidi Sands
Date: 9/28/2021 2:25:00 PM

I am glad to hear that. I saw it today Darlene. Thank you very much :) hugs

Silent One

Date: 9/28/2021 10:48:00 AM

Very clever use of rock n roll... love it

Heidi Sands
Date: 9/28/2021 11:35:00 AM

Thank you Silent One! I am happy you love it. I hope all is well. Nice to see you, my friend :)

Jan Allison

Date: 9/28/2021 9:30:00 AM

we just need the trees tangoing in the wind heidi!:-) hugs Jan xx

Heidi Sands
Date: 9/28/2021 11:34:00 AM

Oh yes! That too Jan. I could have done so much more with this, but my tablet isn't working well and so I had to submit it by phone and was in a rush too. Thank you. I hope all is well :)