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Rock N Roll

The river rolled over the rocks
Moving in a spirited motion
Rock n roll through the valley
The mountains danced above

Heidi Sands

9/28/21

dancemusicriverfree verse

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Caren Krutsinger

September 30, 2021 at 11:46 AM

Ah such imagery!

Heidi Sands

September 30, 2021 at 12:22 PM

Thank you Caren :)

Mike Gentile

September 30, 2021 at 6:41 AM

I love the last line Heidi especially in the musical metaphor!! Happy Thursday!

Heidi Sands

September 30, 2021 at 10:22 AM

Thank you Mike! I hope all is well. Happy Thursday :)

Brian Strand

September 29, 2021 at 6:38 AM

Nothing 'beats' better Heidi

Heidi Sands

September 29, 2021 at 7:56 AM

Thank you Brian :)

Sotto Poet

September 29, 2021 at 4:43 AM

This wonderful quatrain was a pleasure to read, Heidi. River in motion is depicted in this dynamic imagery.

Heidi Sands

September 29, 2021 at 7:57 AM

Thabk you very much Lasaad :)

Vijay Pandit

September 28, 2021 at 1:42 PM

Dynamic imagery of river in motion, Heidi.

Heidi Sands

September 28, 2021 at 2:25 PM

Thank you Vijay. I hope you have a nice evening :)

Darlene De Beaulieu

September 28, 2021 at 12:15 PM

Hello Heidi, as I reading this poem I could vision this scene. Hugs.

Darlene De Beaulieu

September 29, 2021 at 10:13 AM

Hello Heidi, we both saw it. Hugs.

Heidi Sands

September 28, 2021 at 2:25 PM

I am glad to hear that. I saw it today Darlene. Thank you very much :) hugs

Silent One

September 28, 2021 at 10:48 AM

Very clever use of rock n roll... love it

Heidi Sands

September 28, 2021 at 11:35 AM

Thank you Silent One! I am happy you love it. I hope all is well. Nice to see you, my friend :)

Jan Allison

September 28, 2021 at 9:30 AM

we just need the trees tangoing in the wind heidi!:-) hugs Jan xx

Heidi Sands

September 28, 2021 at 11:34 AM

Oh yes! That too Jan. I could have done so much more with this, but my tablet isn't working well and so I had to submit it by phone and was in a rush too. Thank you. I hope all is well :)

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