Rock Me Slower

Again, you ain’t got the rockin’ time To shake my waist jiggling a move Between the thrill that leads to you And a summer lost from faraway grooves. Boy, again those hazed gigs roll and subdue Our desire touching night’s rhyme. When that leather skin comes along My soul falters with a yearning ,raw Raw in toasted coals of primal heat Only to caress me quick, oh hours withdraw. Again, ain't got time to rock me complete; Roll slower, my boy, we can’t go wrong These beating ticks, time cannot rent, Come, roll slower in love’s mood , content. Inspired by The Guess Who’s song, ‘ No Time’ (70s) 'No time left for you Distant roads are calling me' Kelly Deschler's I Love Rock and Roll 11/22/2014
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Johnson-Saunders Avatar
December 20, 2014 at 3:32 PM
Amazing poem, Nette, inspired by a great classic rock song! Congrats!! Hugs, Rhonda
Meier-Hans Avatar
December 11, 2014 at 1:51 PM
Dropping back with my congratulations Nette
Mehta Avatar
December 9, 2014 at 8:36 PM
Very passionate expressions, congrats on the win
Allison Avatar
December 9, 2014 at 1:40 AM
dropping back with my congrats:-) Hugs jan xx
Kayode Avatar
December 8, 2014 at 10:46 PM
I love this Nette,time is never sufficient where and whenever Lovers choose to rock...congrats on the win...huggs
Deschler Avatar
December 8, 2014 at 10:00 PM
I loved this passionate expression for rock music and the stars who make us fall... Congrats on your win, Nette!
Fraser Avatar
November 25, 2014 at 3:59 PM
Rock me gently, rock me slowly. Take it easy don't you know. I have never been loved like this before. Lyrics from another oldie. Isn't it terrific whether for contest or self that music can influence ones poetry. Nice one Princess Nette, must look up this track to listen - hugs, James xx
Sirak Avatar
November 25, 2014 at 7:08 AM
I love the poem and the song. So many people say Who? when I mention that group.
Peterson Avatar
November 23, 2014 at 7:50 PM
A pleasing snippet of rockin' rhyme. This demonstrates your range of expression, for I wouldn't have expected it...and done so well.
Ellison Avatar
November 23, 2014 at 7:22 AM
Your writing is rocking good, my dear Nette! Good luck! Love and hugs, Jack XXX
A. Sharma Avatar
November 23, 2014 at 4:53 AM
Great write n wonderful song that u derived inspiration from! Gl in contest!
Vaso Avatar
November 22, 2014 at 11:43 PM
So many of my poems inspired by music, I listened to the song then re-read this, beautiful!
Carroll Avatar
November 22, 2014 at 11:40 PM
Good rocking tonight Nette!
Kayode Avatar
November 22, 2014 at 10:52 PM
Well thought out Nette and a good Marketing for R&R, this is a winner...huggs
Arana Avatar
November 22, 2014 at 10:01 PM
The Who, Led Zeppelin, and many others influenced my passion for rock. You got me grooving because of the way you switch back and forth, regarding your feelings and mood.You rule, Nette
Allison Avatar
November 22, 2014 at 5:23 PM
great song great poem good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xxx
Kendrick Avatar
November 22, 2014 at 5:08 PM
Reads like a winner to me..Way to go for the contest..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
Meier-Hans Avatar
November 22, 2014 at 3:39 PM
Great song Nette. This makes you want to rock with it.
Leake Avatar
November 22, 2014 at 2:35 PM
Hi Nette, Really enjoyed this piece, got me singing along. Great write. Best wishes Kevin
Smith Avatar
November 22, 2014 at 1:34 PM
A great song...on my way to better things...hugs Tim
Em Avatar
November 22, 2014 at 1:32 PM
When time steals precious moments, you really got to rock and roll.Marvelous poem offering me two kinds of how we need to rock--- energetic and slow. Whoot, Nette
Andresen Avatar
November 22, 2014 at 1:09 PM
- Yes, really love mood ..... so sweet and lovely! - Rock and Roll in the contest, Nette !!! - Have a beautiful and relaxed weekend - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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