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Rock Me Slower

Again, you ain’t got the rockin’ time To shake my waist jiggling a move Between the thrill that leads to you And a summer lost from faraway grooves. Boy, again those hazed gigs roll and subdue Our desire touching night’s rhyme. When that leather skin comes along My soul falters with a yearning ,raw Raw in toasted coals of primal heat Only to caress me quick, oh hours withdraw. Again, ain't got time to rock me complete; Roll slower, my boy, we can’t go wrong These beating ticks, time cannot rent, Come, roll slower in love’s mood , content. Inspired by The Guess Who’s song, ‘ No Time’ (70s) 'No time left for you Distant roads are calling me' Kelly Deschler's I Love Rock and Roll 11/22/2014

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Date: 12/20/2014 3:32:00 PM
Amazing poem, Nette, inspired by a great classic rock song! Congrats!! Hugs, Rhonda
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Date: 12/11/2014 1:51:00 PM
Dropping back with my congratulations Nette
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Date: 12/9/2014 8:36:00 PM
Very passionate expressions, congrats on the win
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Date: 12/9/2014 1:40:00 AM
dropping back with my congrats:-) Hugs jan xx
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Date: 12/8/2014 10:46:00 PM
I love this Nette,time is never sufficient where and whenever Lovers choose to rock...congrats on the win...huggs
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Date: 12/8/2014 10:00:00 PM
I loved this passionate expression for rock music and the stars who make us fall... Congrats on your win, Nette!
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Date: 11/25/2014 3:59:00 PM
Rock me gently, rock me slowly. Take it easy don't you know. I have never been loved like this before. Lyrics from another oldie. Isn't it terrific whether for contest or self that music can influence ones poetry. Nice one Princess Nette, must look up this track to listen - hugs, James xx
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Date: 11/25/2014 7:08:00 AM
I love the poem and the song. So many people say Who? when I mention that group.
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Date: 11/23/2014 7:50:00 PM
A pleasing snippet of rockin' rhyme. This demonstrates your range of expression, for I wouldn't have expected it...and done so well.
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Date: 11/23/2014 7:22:00 AM
Your writing is rocking good, my dear Nette! Good luck! Love and hugs, Jack XXX
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Date: 11/23/2014 4:53:00 AM
Great write n wonderful song that u derived inspiration from! Gl in contest!
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Date: 11/22/2014 11:43:00 PM
So many of my poems inspired by music, I listened to the song then re-read this, beautiful!
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Date: 11/22/2014 11:40:00 PM
Good rocking tonight Nette!
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Date: 11/22/2014 10:52:00 PM
Well thought out Nette and a good Marketing for R&R, this is a winner...huggs
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Date: 11/22/2014 10:01:00 PM
The Who, Led Zeppelin, and many others influenced my passion for rock. You got me grooving because of the way you switch back and forth, regarding your feelings and mood.You rule, Nette
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Date: 11/22/2014 5:23:00 PM
great song great poem good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xxx
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Date: 11/22/2014 5:08:00 PM
Reads like a winner to me..Way to go for the contest..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
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Date: 11/22/2014 3:39:00 PM
Great song Nette. This makes you want to rock with it.
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Date: 11/22/2014 2:35:00 PM
Hi Nette, Really enjoyed this piece, got me singing along. Great write. Best wishes Kevin
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Date: 11/22/2014 1:34:00 PM
A great song...on my way to better things...hugs Tim
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Date: 11/22/2014 1:32:00 PM
When time steals precious moments, you really got to rock and roll.Marvelous poem offering me two kinds of how we need to rock--- energetic and slow. Whoot, Nette
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Date: 11/22/2014 1:09:00 PM
- Yes, really love mood ..... so sweet and lovely! - Rock and Roll in the contest, Nette !!! - Have a beautiful and relaxed weekend - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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