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Rock Bottom

Here I go again; not knowing when it will end. Will I perish; Or be saved once again? Just one more hit. I promise I'll quit! I'm awake for days. I crave …and crave ……and crave The streets are now my home. I've never felt this alone. If I could only just go back. Go Home. Rock Bottom is where I sit. Is this all that's left? Is this it? This is my beginning; and even though. My whole world is spinning. I can't! I won't! Ever Give Up!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 3/22/2013 6:32:00 PM
BRIAN , a nice warm welcome to the soup. My name is Linda, many poets on the soup call me PD for fun. I'm stopping by to invite you to one of my latest contest... called ---> "Only for the New Poets of 2013--the first poem you posted on the soup..." he he he Yes it has a long title. But, I want to give the new poets on the soup the enjoyment and challenges we offer in our contest. If you like please consider my contest. I love the enjoyment of meeting and reading the new poems from all new poets. Thank you for your time~ Always*LINDA
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Date: 3/19/2013 11:42:00 AM
- You have written a good poem Brian, which I like. - Welcome to P-Soup, hope you will get much pleasure to share your thoughts and words here with us. - Always nice with new "poets", exciting ..... - Good luck! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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