Robot

I am no robot Transform me, I disagree I’m natural with a heart All my life, I want Is me, with love, with feelings I'm warm, not cold as steel. Dalila G Agtani For RusselL Sivey’s Contest: SEDOKA ME 2/20/12

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Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 2/22/2012 8:58:00 AM

I really like the conviction you put in here, Dalila! Yes, so true and sad how some people just seem to go through the motions and forget that other people feel. Very nice write! And thanks, heehee obviously I enjoy playing around with my name, I have had several name changes here, am I weird? I probably am, especially since I love my name-- as for my avatar pic, y this was taken from inside a car-that's Manila traffic for you :D I sorta moved the camera to capture the lights that way ;) hugs!

Harry Horsman

Date: 2/22/2012 5:49:00 AM

wow this is good, good luck in comtest. harry

Green Trees

Date: 2/21/2012 9:37:00 PM

Good luck in the contest! I enjoyed reading :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/21/2012 6:55:00 PM

You chose a really cool topic to do, hey, this could also have been in the transform contest!! (except now it's closed) Good luck in the Sedoka contest.

Lizanne Scholtz

Date: 2/21/2012 6:51:00 PM

Wonderful write Dalila, thank you for your comment, love Elizabeth

John Rhinem

Date: 2/21/2012 8:45:00 AM

Smile ˜ You sound sexy - Love, John!:) *