Robot

I  am no robot 
Transform me, I disagree
I’m natural with a heart
All my life, I want
Is me, with love, with feelings 
I'm warm, not cold as steel. 

Dalila G Agtani
For RusselL Sivey’s Contest:
	SEDOKA ME
2/20/12

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Kabuteng P.Ink K.

February 22, 2012 at 8:58 AM

I really like the conviction you put in here, Dalila! Yes, so true and sad how some people just seem to go through the motions and forget that other people feel. Very nice write! And thanks, heehee obviously I enjoy playing around with my name, I have had several name changes here, am I weird? I probably am, especially since I love my name-- as for my avatar pic, y this was taken from inside a car-that's Manila traffic for you :D I sorta moved the camera to capture the lights that way ;) hugs!

Harry Horsman

February 22, 2012 at 5:49 AM

wow this is good, good luck in comtest. harry

Green Trees

February 21, 2012 at 9:37 PM

Good luck in the contest! I enjoyed reading :)

Andrea Dietrich

February 21, 2012 at 6:55 PM

You chose a really cool topic to do, hey, this could also have been in the transform contest!! (except now it's closed) Good luck in the Sedoka contest.