Robin's Tree House

As I depart from the
trail and into the
bushes I go.

Robin's tree house right
above my head, so many
fine birds, four or five I see.

Such a charming bird,
sounds coming from
them so gentle.

Robin's tree house by
the pond, but
hidden so well.

Goodbye my robin
chums, until
another grand day.

wrote 9-19-07  at Lowell ponds
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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July 29, 2008 at 3:17 PM
James - what I'm saying is that each poem you write explains the beauty and solitude of the the ponds so well I'll read the poems to him and through your words he can do the rendering based on your words - Your so descriptive in the things that you see I bet he can get pretty close - You describe things that well - very detailed - blessings
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