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Robin's Song

A robin’s song flies Up into the air and meets Small silver snowflakes— The song spreads its wings to dance On top of snowflake silence.

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Beata Agustin

Date: 3/25/2025 7:30:00 AM

Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.

Skat A

Date: 5/4/2016 11:50:00 AM

Patrick Randolph, I'm just here visiting your poem once again. If you ever return to post, I'd like to come back to read your newest. Happy Days **SKAT**

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/27/2016 8:05:00 PM

PATRICK, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. LOVE LINDA

Skat A

Date: 9/9/2015 9:15:00 AM

Patrick, enjoyed reading your verse today. SKAT

Anoucheka Gangabissoon

Date: 10/22/2011 4:13:00 AM

Hello just visiting around, beautiful this poem...personification of the robin's dance...!