Robin's Song

A robin’s song flies
Up into the air and meets
Small silver snowflakes—

The song spreads its wings to dance
On top of snowflake silence.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2006

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Agustin Avatar
March 25, 2025 at 7:30 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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May 4, 2016 at 11:50 AM
Patrick Randolph, I'm just here visiting your poem once again. If you ever return to post, I'd like to come back to read your newest. Happy Days **SKAT**
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January 27, 2016 at 8:05 PM
PATRICK, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. LOVE LINDA
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September 9, 2015 at 9:15 AM
Patrick, enjoyed reading your verse today. SKAT
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October 22, 2011 at 4:13 AM
Hello just visiting around, beautiful this poem...personification of the robin's dance...!
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