Gershon Wolf Poet Verse

Robin Red-Breast Alights

robin red-breast alights
winter welcomes that odd prancing
pale sun nods; robin twitches, smiles
hungry beak pecks away
worm wonders why, what the rush is


          May 14, 2019
Entry in Writing Challenge 2, May 2019, Lind68868 contest
       Sponsor: Dear Heart
  Theme: a living scene, written in Verse

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Connie Marcum Wong May 24, 2019 at 6:34 PM Congratulations on your deserving first placement Gershon! : ) Gershon Wolf May 24, 2019 at 7:10 PM Many thanks for noticing and taking time for congrats, Connie. Best to you! :) gw

Robert Lindley May 24, 2019 at 2:43 PM Congratulations on your win in Dear Heart's Lind68868 contest my friend! God bless.... Robert Gershon Wolf May 24, 2019 at 3:28 PM Appreciate you taking time to note this, Robert. A truly nice gesture on your part, duly recorded in my heart! Best wishes, Gershon

Anne-Lise Andresen May 21, 2019 at 12:05 PM - Congratulations on a great first place in this contest, a wonderful writing Gershon :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Gershon Wolf May 21, 2019 at 2:39 PM Thank you so much for noticing and commenting, Anne-Lise. Best wishes, Gershon

Constance La France May 21, 2019 at 9:22 AM Gershon congratulations on your win in my writing challenge with this excellent poem! Gershon Wolf May 21, 2019 at 11:37 AM Truly a privilege to have had the opportunity to enter, and truly thrilled with the result. Thank you so much, Constance! Happy Tuesday! :) gw

Andrea Dietrich May 20, 2019 at 3:25 PM cute picture you gave us!! Congrats on the win. Gershon Wolf May 20, 2019 at 8:28 PM Thanks for the positivity, Andrea. Greatly appreciated. Best wishes, Gershon

P.S. Awtry May 20, 2019 at 2:32 PM Back with congratulations!

Caren Krutsinger May 15, 2019 at 1:08 AM Your worms are smarter than the nightcrawlers we have in Kansas then. Gershon Wolf May 15, 2019 at 11:03 AM OK. I'm going to try to wrap my arms around your comment, utilizing logic: Let's see: a.) Not all worms are nightcrawlers. b.) But all nightcrawlers are worms. Therefore, c.) Not all worms crawl at night! How's that for brilliant deductive reasoning?! (Ahem, no answer necessary! LOL). :) gw

P.S. Awtry May 14, 2019 at 11:36 PM The poor hapless clueless worm! Nice write Gershon! Gershon Wolf May 15, 2019 at 11:01 AM Ha, ha -- defenseless (worms) too; they need a good, tough Defense Attorney, methinks. LOL. Thanks for the viewpoint, P.S! Best wishes, Gershon

Tom Cunningham May 14, 2019 at 2:49 PM You captured the scene well Gershon, good luck. Tom. Gershon Wolf May 14, 2019 at 7:07 PM Appreciate your positive feedback on Mr. Robin Red-breast, Tom! :) gw