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Robin

Within the oak tree, I have settled here
Whilst aureate sun peeks between the leaves.
My chirping song is heard roosting from top;
Can you see me; beguiling is the day.
Inherent nature's rhyme, a placid scene.
Spring with twelve hours daylight, nights my shortest.
I am six years old with reddish-orange breast,
Unbound and quintessential of them all.
Tugging squirmy earthworms out of the ground.

Cherubic is the flanking mockingbird
Has alone flown away now is silent.
I rule the passing hours of night and day.

Good-bye, good-bye the fiddle months last flit.
Summer nearly done, Autumn outburst late
With fruit bayberry, cherry, pyracanth;
Around the lattice to set pudgy grapes
Budding flowers for fructifying bees.

Lingering on a branch plume with winter
First snow my wings are spread quickly, fly off.
A glow of warmth I bring on winter's day!


7/25/2020

I am a Robin 
 142 words
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Allison Avatar
June 30, 2021 at 3:45 PM
Dropping back again to say many congrats on your win Eve:-) hugs Jan xx
Goldsmith Avatar
June 28, 2021 at 9:07 AM
Congratulations on your win. A beautiful story/write and picture. I love the robin and the red bird. Enjoy your win with blessings...................
Deepa Avatar
August 3, 2020 at 4:25 AM
Nice imageries to describe Robin.You've wonderfully penned it Eve mam:-)Well,i can hear your roosting from top;-):-P Congratulations on your lovely win:-) Keep glowing.Take care.Much love sent to you:-)
Allison Avatar
August 2, 2020 at 12:35 PM
Such enchanting imagery eve, many congratulations on your win :-) Hugs Jan xx
Canerdy Avatar
August 2, 2020 at 12:13 PM
Such a descriptive, lovely WINNING poem, Eve! Janice
Hinshaw Avatar
August 2, 2020 at 9:35 AM
Congratulations, Eve, for your well-deserved win for this beauty. Thanks for your kind comments re my win and best to you always as you continue your poetical journey - Bob
Mishra Avatar
August 2, 2020 at 4:10 AM
Wow! The tale of a robin and the gorgeous Autumn with berries and snow is breathtaking. Congratulations on your win Eve :)
Kitchin Avatar
August 1, 2020 at 12:49 PM
Eve, congratulations on your winning placement, love the imagery in this gem!
Poetry Avatar
July 26, 2020 at 8:46 AM
The sight beautiful, the sound enchantment, the picture blooms within your words Eve
Andresen Avatar
July 26, 2020 at 7:15 AM
- A beautiful bird and a beautiful poem, Eve :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Somadas Avatar
July 26, 2020 at 1:11 AM
Great write Eve.. A proud Robin singing his song.. Great entry.. Good luck..
Proxenos Avatar
July 26, 2020 at 12:26 AM
What a beautiful bird, it is the firswt picture I have seen close up of a plump awesome little robin, think he (she) is adorable! Beautifully crafted poem, Blessings and hugs, Jennifer. Please go to soupmail.
Buehler Avatar
July 25, 2020 at 9:17 PM
An interesting and lovely tale, as recounted by red robin , himself. A fine creation and pretty picture, too. Good luck in the contest. :)
Wolf Avatar
July 25, 2020 at 8:54 PM
This is so educational for me, and in such a pleasant, poetic way! Are you a bird-watcher or robin-lover? You expressed so much knowledge. G.L. in the contest, Eve! ~ Gershon
Roper Avatar
July 25, 2020 at 8:56 PM
Hello, Gershon, no I am not a bird watcher , but a bird lover.. I have them in my trees at all times and I love to hear them sing.
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