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He strokes my voluptuous contour delicately As bold petals crown this auburn hair, Enticing a heady desire to roam Through a woodland's flamboyant trails: And the artist pours dotted hues From my four seasons, Imbuing a rebellious womanly grit Upon layered coatings to decorate my bodice With robes of passion, of iced distance, Until his hand chooses the flavored sways through a cycle’s dance, eternalizing my flamed glow. Though the brush of fleeting hours ; I rise to touch the moon, to inhale bloated fruits and leaves ...how impeccable! When new mornings crawl, my seasons live again for pleasure and holiness before twigs of age melt my life’s fragrance. Artwork Contest of Lewis Raynes Painting from Gustav Flimt " Tree Of Life" 8/31/2017

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Date: 9/7/2017 8:41:00 AM
Congrats on your win, Nette! Janice
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Date: 9/7/2017 6:24:00 AM
Exquisite
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Date: 9/6/2017 9:45:00 PM
A beautiful write Nette, congratulations.
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Date: 9/1/2017 11:07:00 AM
A beautiful Art nette...you don't need any luck...your lovely words speak for themselves...god bless...^WW^
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Date: 9/1/2017 7:46:00 AM
Lovely imagery and you have expertly imbued the tree with human traits - personification personified!! Best of luck in the contest. Regards, John.
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Date: 8/31/2017 4:04:00 PM
there is a skill in every poem you unveil and in taking on this complex painting you have revealed an intellect I am jealous of...
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Date: 8/31/2017 2:24:00 PM
Intricately designed giving human qualities to the tree of life. The last stanza is flawless. Thank you for sharing!
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Date: 8/31/2017 1:41:00 PM
- I know his paintings ... it always causes me pain in my eyes ... a lot of work for the eyes to find the details :) - You've described it beautiful, Nette - Good luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 8/31/2017 8:22:00 AM
You have beautifully explained that painting, Nette:)
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Date: 8/31/2017 5:39:00 AM
So lovely, nette! I am cheering for you to win--so well written!!
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Date: 8/31/2017 4:13:00 AM
It's early in the morning here and Russell wants me to get on and comment on some of his friends poetry, so I am doing it as I am up now. :) He says, "Your poem is fabulous Nette, I really loved it this morning. I have missed your exquisite poetry the last few days. You always impress me my friend. You bring out the creative side in me with each poem you write. You are awesome Nette! Great work." This is a nice poem, I like it, Emma :)
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