Jack Horne Poet Rhyme

Robbie's Cherished Love

The person Robbie cherished more than life
was Rosalyn, his friend and then his wife;
but as he worked she dated other men -
including Stephen, Richard, John and Ken.
So Robbie left and found another love,
but got so jumpy and suspicious of
the guys she knew at work, and thought that she
would leave him too. He's now on number three...

written 1st April for Constance's Cherish contest

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Sara Kendrick April 9, 2021 at 2:41 PM People who are involved with more than one person over time in a long term relationship usually carry baggage from relationship to the next. If you have two people carrying that baggage then their might not be room for a good relationship at all. Enjoyed reading your work. Reads like a good contender for the contest to me. Way to go. Thanks for all the visits to my page. Sara

Jennifer Proxenos April 9, 2021 at 1:06 PM Jack congratulations my dear friend - poor Robbie will he ever settle down and not be suspicious, when a trust is broken, it is difficult to trust again. Great poem. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.

Constance La France April 9, 2021 at 8:31 AM Jack, congratulations on your win in my Writing Prompt Cherish, well done, love _Constance

Jan Allison April 1, 2021 at 2:45 PM for better for curse lol I guess he's just keeping his options open and leaving the door open for number 4 5 and 6 lol, hugs jan xx

L Milton Hankins April 1, 2021 at 1:03 PM So, Jack, it appears to me that Robbie has a rather shallow concept of "cherish," but, OTOH, I can see his paranoia about women. I hope #3 works out for him.