Roast of Rhyme - Rhyme Schema

I am trying to relate to the strategy of rhyme,
Using words to titillate from the droll to the sublime.
Do I write "a rime that scintillates" to describe a ghost
Of frost? I consult the information highway hosts
Who assimilate rhyme-chimes on internet dot coms,
Those prime verse doctors granting aid so poems do not bomb.
I'll create a word-dance show to equate a tango's flow,
So solitude and fortitude and quietude must glow!
These multitudes of disciplines provost my attitude;
Will you, for faulty demeanor, please grant me latitude?
My aptitude to mutilate (a crime I must not boast.)
Is like a marmalade of brine upon my morning toast.
I ventilate and, then, deflate my inmost certitude;
This grime will grow in plenitude, a naughty turpitude.
I'd rather ev'ry word I post would jubilate the coasts,
Mime the scent of thyme about each lyrical outpost.
This roast of rhyme will blow ego and have me eating crow
If I don't quickly disappear, you know, vamoose and go.


© Faye Lanham Gibson, June 10, 2014
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Franklin Avatar
July 22, 2014 at 6:18 AM
WOW...I DONT HAVE A SPECTACULAR VERNACKULAR... OR EVEN SPELL GREAT. I WROTE TWO POEMS...BOTH RYME...AFTER READING THIS I MAY NEVER TRY TO WRITE ONE AGAIN. thx
A   Avatar
July 14, 2014 at 1:21 AM
Faye, Congratulations, on your awesome win. Love Linda
Smith Avatar
July 11, 2014 at 12:09 PM
Congrats on a great win with this brilliant write, Faye! I did not dare tackle this one! Hats off to you my friend! Hugs.. Arlene
Lamoureux Avatar
July 10, 2014 at 7:13 AM
Thoroughly enjoyed your winning poem.
A. Sharma Avatar
July 10, 2014 at 6:51 AM
Fantastic take on rhyme schema Faye! Congrats on top win!
Smith Avatar
July 10, 2014 at 4:56 AM
Faye...well done. I like how your rhymes were spread around...nice take... Congrats Tim
Roberts Avatar
July 10, 2014 at 3:06 AM
wow well done Faye, I didnt even attempt this form. Congrats ...Seren
Walker  Avatar
July 9, 2014 at 11:18 PM
Wonderful write Faye... Enjoy your high marks. You did very well. Verlena
Lindley Avatar
June 11, 2014 at 8:44 PM
This is an awesome write and the rules were many and very restrictive but you pulled it of brilliantly and beautifully too!! BBBBRAVOOOOO
Gibson Avatar
June 11, 2014 at 8:47 PM
Ha ha! thanks. I think I may have overdone it...I wanted it to be kind of tongue in cheek, but I may have bit my tongue. Lol!
Dietrich Avatar
June 10, 2014 at 5:59 PM
oh my goodness. what an elaborate poem. I am almost afraid to look this challenge over. Seems so complicated but it sure looks like you pulled it off. WOw.
Gibson Avatar
June 10, 2014 at 6:38 PM
It was complicated. I thought I had the thing written and checked her guidelines and found I had only included half of the words I was supposed to. I wanted this to be a spoof, but I may have gone overboard. Lol!
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