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Roaming in Nature

Oh, I just like to roam, into a forest hued with green; where the trees have created a roof dome, and I can breath air that is fresh and clean. Beyond is a blue sky, where a thousand wild birds gracefully fly, then, land in the lush trees to rest and sigh. I love flowers, and can wander for long hours; where foliage towers. There is a magic in the rich dark loam, that make the vines tangle between; the trees nearby, breathtaking after those sudden showers. ____________________ August 11, 2020 Poetry/Rhyme/Roaming in Nature Copyright Protected, ID 20-1277-124-03 All Rights Reserved, 2020, Constance La France Written for the contest, Nature Rhyming Poetry sponsor, Brenda Chiri First Place

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Date: 8/22/2020 9:18:00 PM
This is beautiful. I really like that the birds land in lush trees to rest and sigh.. that word sigh is so precious when applied to a bird. Congratulations on your win!
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Constance La France
Date: 8/26/2020 9:44:00 AM
Carol, thank you for the beautiful, the comment and the congratulations, appreciate _Constance
Date: 8/20/2020 8:45:00 PM
Beautiful and serene feeling, Constance, congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve
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Constance La France
Date: 8/21/2020 8:39:00 AM
Eve, thank you for the compliment on my poem and for the congratulations _Constance
Date: 8/20/2020 9:32:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. Your line, "Oh, I just like to roam," Sounds good to me. Let's go???? I can see and feel your poem. Enjoy your win and day................
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Constance La France
Date: 8/21/2020 8:40:00 AM
Paula, thanks for the congratulations, I do not go for walks, I meander _Constance
Date: 8/12/2020 5:49:00 AM
Aaah..... beautiful feeling..dear Constance mam. I love that ..coz I am in love with nature.:-) Will join you for a good roam out;-) Amazing imageries~ "There is a magic in the rich dark loam" enjoyed your lines. Take care.Have a lovely day.Much love:-)
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Constance La France
Date: 8/17/2020 6:19:00 PM
Deepa, thanks so much for the compliment on my poem, appreciate _Constance
Date: 8/12/2020 1:57:00 AM
Breathtaking indeed, Constance:)
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Constance La France
Date: 8/17/2020 6:20:00 PM
Jo, I love that word breathtaking _Constance
Date: 8/11/2020 1:38:00 PM
PLUS there is no Roaming Charge if you leave your phone at home! Aloha! Rico
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Constance La France
Date: 8/17/2020 6:20:00 PM
Rico, thanks for visiting and very funny _Constance