Roadtrip

R iding with a bunch of friends.
O pen road lies ahead.
A dventures keep luring us to the,
D angers waiting round the bend.

T he blue sky above us,
R oad still ahead of us.
I n await of what lies next.
P enned this down for this was the best.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Swaminathan Avatar
November 11, 2013 at 11:45 PM
nice acrostic, a good idea, sitting idle and making good , time management at its best
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November 12, 2013 at 2:52 AM
Thank you niki ~V~
Harris Avatar
September 5, 2013 at 12:51 PM
This is pretty good! I like it... Nice work. :-)
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September 20, 2013 at 1:44 AM
Thank you for your support
A  Avatar
September 5, 2013 at 7:53 AM
Hi Vinayak, Congratulations on your win ~SKAT~
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September 20, 2013 at 1:44 AM
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Dietrich Avatar
September 1, 2013 at 2:27 PM
this is a cool memory of a well remembered road trip. Congrats for your win.
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September 20, 2013 at 1:45 AM
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Adams Avatar
August 31, 2013 at 8:45 AM
congrats on your win :)
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September 20, 2013 at 1:45 AM
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Morgan Avatar
August 31, 2013 at 7:56 AM
Congrats on your win. Morgan
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September 20, 2013 at 1:46 AM
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A   Avatar
August 31, 2013 at 7:43 AM
Vinayak, nice acrostic, and thanks for sharing the awesome meaning and pleasure of the trip... Linda
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September 20, 2013 at 1:46 AM
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Gorelick Avatar
August 30, 2013 at 9:34 PM
Congrats on your win...it really is " whats around the courner"...BG
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September 20, 2013 at 1:47 AM
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August 30, 2013 at 8:51 PM
Vinayak, thank you for supporting my contest and congrats on your 6th place win! Nice work! Love, Kim
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September 20, 2013 at 1:47 AM
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Jackson Avatar
August 30, 2013 at 4:40 AM
I enjoyed the road trip. Nice images. Best Wishes Linda x
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September 20, 2013 at 1:47 AM
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Soler Avatar
August 29, 2013 at 11:03 AM
"Hi! your poem is short and sweet..great job"
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September 20, 2013 at 1:48 AM
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Babu Avatar
August 29, 2013 at 2:22 AM
GOOD WORK... VINAYAK
Danie Avatar
August 29, 2013 at 2:18 AM
Well penned...way to go :) A~D
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August 29, 2013 at 2:26 AM
THNX BUDDY
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