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Roadside Lilies Hiku 45

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Placed First in: 1400 Poetry Contest Sponsored by Brian Strand

Roadside Lilies Hiku 45 roadside lilies white in full bloom with delight~ yearning for human sight. e s w i ~ ~ h l ~ ~ i i t ------------------------ l e r –o –a d –s –I –d -e ----------------------- 0 . o . l . . . . . m in f ~u ~l ~l b . . . •. . . . d _e _l_ i_ g_ h_ t~ w . . . h I . , t i g y ~e ~a ~r ~n ~I ~n ~g for human s • h t.

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Date: 8/4/2025 11:16:00 AM
gosh, I feel like i just commented to this one. Well, congrats again!! Great job
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Date: 8/4/2025 9:06:00 AM
Fantastic rhyming hiku portraying the beauty of lilies by the roadside. Congratulations on your top win, my friend
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Krishnanand Guptar
Date: 8/4/2025 12:32:00 PM
Thank you dear poet for appreciating the above Hiku/Haiku and for your kind wishes. Through the roadside lilies, I also had in mind village beauties often toiling hard in fields, unknown, unseen, unlamented, longing for sympathetic eyes....
Date: 8/3/2025 11:05:00 AM
- Beautiful to see by the roadside, Krishnanand :) - hugs
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/3/2025 11:06:00 AM
Best wishes in the contest :)

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