Road Trip and Ruffed Feathers

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R uffed feathers smoothed
O ver minor infractions tempers flared
A nalogy to two Cocks fighting 
D estiny exciting vacation

T angled arms and legs
R estlessness dissipated
I ndividualy each child slept
P atiently dreaming of first ocean splash

Sponsor: Kim Merryman
Contest: ROAD TRIP
Written: August 24, 2013
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Mohammed Avatar
August 28, 2013 at 6:13 PM
I like this one Sara. Your acrostic was lovely to read. Sending you greetings.
Horne Avatar
August 26, 2013 at 9:28 AM
lol, could picture this one
Sivey Avatar
August 24, 2013 at 8:50 PM
This is a tremendous and enlightening write my friend! I really enjoyed reading this wonderful poem this evening! What a glorious piece, quite the outstanding poem, Great Work!!
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