Road Trip

Rough roads
   Occasional vomiting 
   And crying by weary child
   Deadly tailback

   Terrain becomes pretty
   Rapidly relaxing
   Into destination
   Paradise
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Pettit Avatar
January 22, 2014 at 7:36 PM
Next time, take along some dramamine.
Chappell Avatar
September 15, 2013 at 5:54 AM
a slice of everyday lifes thank you
A   Avatar
August 26, 2013 at 5:12 PM
car sickness... gets me every time, a good write, enjoyed, ~always, Linda
Carroll Avatar
August 26, 2013 at 1:24 PM
Hi Linda. Descriptive acrostic write...Nicely done... Ken..
Andresen Avatar
August 25, 2013 at 12:10 PM
- Well done ...enjoy your trip. - Have a nice Sunday, Linda. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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