Road Trip

Riding across the country with my best friend,
Off road trails then back on pavement again.
Always loving the wind blowing through our hair,
Doing as we wish without a worry or a care.

The sun comes up and then quickly goes down,
Rarely finding the time to even look around.
If we should blink our eyes for a tad too long,
Perhaps... tis a delightful case of directions gone wrong.


Contest~Kim Merryman~ROAD TRIP

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013



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Date: 9/5/2013 7:51:00 AM
a nice win Maggie, SKAT
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Date: 9/1/2013 2:23:00 PM
this is delightful!! Great acrostic writing. Congrats on your win.
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Date: 8/31/2013 9:42:00 AM
lovely write Maggie...congrats on your win
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Date: 8/31/2013 8:38:00 AM
I have had many road trip adventures with my best friend....congrats on your win :)
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Date: 8/31/2013 7:51:00 AM
3M cool Congrats on your win. Morgan
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Date: 8/31/2013 7:40:00 AM
Hi Maggie, i like your road trip winning poem... congrats and thanks for the message...Linda
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Date: 8/30/2013 9:30:00 PM
Cute one, congrats on your win.BG
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Date: 8/30/2013 8:41:00 PM
Sounds like a fun trip. Maggie, thank you for supporting my contest and congrats on your 3rd place win! Well done! Love, Kim
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