Road Trip

Riding across the country with my best friend,
Off road trails then back on pavement again.
Always loving the wind blowing through our hair,
Doing as we wish without a worry or a care.

The sun comes up and then quickly goes down,
Rarely finding the time to even look around.
If we should blink our eyes for a tad too long,
Perhaps... tis a delightful case of directions gone wrong.


Contest~Kim Merryman~ROAD TRIP
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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A  Avatar
September 5, 2013 at 7:51 AM
a nice win Maggie, SKAT
Dietrich Avatar
September 1, 2013 at 2:23 PM
this is delightful!! Great acrostic writing. Congrats on your win.
May Avatar
August 31, 2013 at 9:42 AM
lovely write Maggie...congrats on your win
Adams Avatar
August 31, 2013 at 8:38 AM
I have had many road trip adventures with my best friend....congrats on your win :)
Morgan Avatar
August 31, 2013 at 7:51 AM
3M cool Congrats on your win. Morgan
A   Avatar
August 31, 2013 at 7:40 AM
Hi Maggie, i like your road trip winning poem... congrats and thanks for the message...Linda
Gorelick Avatar
August 30, 2013 at 9:30 PM
Cute one, congrats on your win.BG
Merryman Avatar
August 30, 2013 at 8:41 PM
Sounds like a fun trip. Maggie, thank you for supporting my contest and congrats on your 3rd place win! Well done! Love, Kim
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