Road Trip

Road Trip Rumbling down the road, Over potholes, bumps and hills, Active backseat of kids Dead set on not taking spills. Trying to make it home, Rain was causing delay. Inside the car we were Praying all the way.

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Skat A

Date: 9/5/2013 7:50:00 AM

Dr Jim, , Congratulations on your win ~SKAT~

Drjim Martin
Date: 9/5/2013 8:46:00 AM

Thanks a bunch!! I appreciate your comment...Jim

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/1/2013 2:21:00 PM

love love love it. Congratulations.

Drjim Martin
Date: 9/5/2013 8:47:00 AM

Thanks Andrea!! Glad you liked it....Jim

Sandra Adams

Date: 8/31/2013 8:35:00 AM

nicely done...congrats on your win!

Drjim Martin
Date: 8/31/2013 1:38:00 PM

Thank you Sandra! Glad you liked it...Jim

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/31/2013 7:53:00 AM

Dr Jim, a wonderful winning poem.. I like to pray when driving near or far from home.. it helps me comfort any thought.. luv~ Linda

Drjim Martin
Date: 8/31/2013 1:38:00 PM

Thanks Linda!! I appreciate your comments....Jim

Danesh Morgan

Date: 8/31/2013 7:46:00 AM

Congrats on your win. Morgan

Drjim Martin
Date: 8/31/2013 1:39:00 PM

Thanks Morgan! Glad you liked it...Jim

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 8/30/2013 9:28:00 PM

Whew! Quite a ride...congrats. BG

Drjim Martin
Date: 8/31/2013 1:40:00 PM

Thank you Barbara! Glad you liked it...Jim

Kim Merryman

Date: 8/30/2013 8:36:00 PM

Jim, thank you for supporting my contest and Congrats on your 3rd place win! Well done! Love, Kim

Drjim Martin
Date: 8/31/2013 1:40:00 PM

Thank you Kim!! Appreciate your comments...Jim

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/15/2013 7:51:00 PM

a safe trip for all that drive in the rain, I very much take caution when it comes to that, enjoyed your write , ~always, Linda

Drjim Martin
Date: 8/31/2013 1:41:00 PM

Thanks Linda!! Jim