Drjim Martin Poet Acrostic

Road Trip

Road Trip

Rumbling down the road,
Over potholes, bumps and hills,
Active backseat of kids
Dead set on not taking spills.

Trying to make it home,
Rain was causing delay.
Inside the car we were
Praying all the way.

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Skat A September 5, 2013 at 7:50 AM Dr Jim, , Congratulations on your win ~SKAT~ Drjim Martin September 5, 2013 at 8:46 AM Thanks a bunch!! I appreciate your comment...Jim

Andrea Dietrich September 1, 2013 at 2:21 PM love love love it. Congratulations. Drjim Martin September 5, 2013 at 8:47 AM Thanks Andrea!! Glad you liked it....Jim

Sandra Adams August 31, 2013 at 8:35 AM nicely done...congrats on your win! Drjim Martin August 31, 2013 at 1:38 PM Thank you Sandra! Glad you liked it...Jim

Poet Destroyer A August 31, 2013 at 7:53 AM Dr Jim, a wonderful winning poem.. I like to pray when driving near or far from home.. it helps me comfort any thought.. luv~ Linda Drjim Martin August 31, 2013 at 1:38 PM Thanks Linda!! I appreciate your comments....Jim

Danesh Morgan August 31, 2013 at 7:46 AM Congrats on your win. Morgan Drjim Martin August 31, 2013 at 1:39 PM Thanks Morgan! Glad you liked it...Jim

Barbara Gorelick August 30, 2013 at 9:28 PM Whew! Quite a ride...congrats. BG Drjim Martin August 31, 2013 at 1:40 PM Thank you Barbara! Glad you liked it...Jim

Kim Merryman August 30, 2013 at 8:36 PM Jim, thank you for supporting my contest and Congrats on your 3rd place win! Well done! Love, Kim Drjim Martin August 31, 2013 at 1:40 PM Thank you Kim!! Appreciate your comments...Jim

Poet Destroyer A August 15, 2013 at 7:51 PM a safe trip for all that drive in the rain, I very much take caution when it comes to that, enjoyed your write , ~always, Linda Drjim Martin August 31, 2013 at 1:41 PM Thanks Linda!! Jim