Road trip

Roaming the city or country roads
Only the wind in our hair
And grass between our toes
Daring to walk feet bare

The country side is beautiful 
Red roses and trees so tall
In a minute we cross city road
People everywhere having a ball
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Buhagiar Avatar
June 5, 2025 at 10:46 AM
Can't say I enjoy walking barefoot anywhere, yet I loved your poem. Great rhymes. Had to use rhyme lately, sweating profusely. Blessings.
Jones Avatar
June 5, 2025 at 3:51 PM
I’m a country girl so bare feet is natural! Thanks for the love! Hugs and blessings returned!
Rodrigues Avatar
June 4, 2025 at 12:55 PM
I used to enjoy walking barefoot in the grass! God bless!
Jones Avatar
June 4, 2025 at 1:06 PM
God bless! We are lucky to have had that experience!
Poet Avatar
June 2, 2025 at 6:44 PM
Karen, what a delightful tour in the countryside. Feet unshod, how lovely...
Jones Avatar
June 3, 2025 at 3:29 AM
Thanks for reading dear Sotto!
Edmonds  Avatar
June 2, 2025 at 4:14 PM
A lovely road trip Karen. Feet bare, how wonderful… Beryl
Jones Avatar
June 2, 2025 at 5:19 PM
Thanks Beryl!
Goldsmith Avatar
June 1, 2025 at 11:04 AM
You have painted a wonderful "Road trip" write with your words. Love It... Have a blessed day writing away...............
Jones Avatar
June 1, 2025 at 3:34 PM
Thanks for reading Paula! Hugs
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