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Road Trip

It had no radio
and couldn't fly at all
every wheel would wobble
because they were too small
~ red and rusted wagon,
a limo for my dog...

For Nette's Hexiline Contest
May 9th, 2025

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Andrea Dietrich

June 1, 2025 at 11:28 AM

Cute cute cute. Don't know if it win but it deserves to and it got a well deserved POTD. Belated congrats

Sam Kauffman

May 12, 2025 at 10:33 AM

Craig, belated congratulations for your delightful POTD! What a wonderful picture of childhood - a boy and his dog with a "wobbly" old wagon as a canine limo! It's a great picture. Blessings to you!

Paula Goldsmith

May 12, 2025 at 8:39 AM

Congratulations on your POTD win. I enjoyed reading your creative/fun "Road Trip" write. Guess your dog rode in style. Have a wonderful day/week with your win..........

Ink Empress

May 12, 2025 at 2:47 AM

Dear Craigsz, A very cute and lighthearted poem, so well written! I can imagine it as your dogs limo, would love to see your dog. I love what youv done here for the road trip! Pleasure reading this today. Congratulations on your well deserved POTD, sending you light always

Brandy Nicole

May 11, 2025 at 7:52 PM

Of course, such a fancy ride for your dog. :) Your thoughts bring a smile, Craig. Congratulations my dear friend, on Poem of the Day. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy

Kim Rodrigues

May 11, 2025 at 4:20 PM

Congrats on POTD! Love this winner!

Richard Nah

May 11, 2025 at 3:39 PM

Short and simple, yet brilliant and unique! Congrats!

Anne-Lise Andresen

May 11, 2025 at 10:28 AM

- A fun p.o.t.d. congratulations, Craig :) -

Zyrool Gifford

May 11, 2025 at 10:08 AM

Hello Craig, congratulations on your POTD win with this beautifully crafted piece. Wishing you a wonderful day as you celebrate.

Tania Kitchin

May 11, 2025 at 5:05 AM

Craig, a cute poem, congratulations on POTD.

Heidi Sands

May 11, 2025 at 4:30 AM

I enjoy your POTD. Congratulations ! :)

Charlotte Puddifoot

May 11, 2025 at 2:55 AM

i don't often read and comment on potd but for you i'll make an exception..."wheel would wobble" that's alliteration falling naturally :)

Karen Jones

May 11, 2025 at 2:05 AM

A fun and adorable poem for potd! Congratulations and best wishes for the contest!

Beryl Edmonds

May 11, 2025 at 1:59 AM

We all remember our favourite toys, from when we were little girls and boys.Congratulations Craig on receiving the honour of poem of the day… Beryl

CayCay Godwin

May 10, 2025 at 10:24 PM

Very cute, you gave me my first giggle of May 11th - hey Mother's Day. So glad I found this gem. Oh, those red wagons. It was my little sister that I pulled around. All the best ... CayCay