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Road Trip

It had no radio and couldn't fly at all every wheel would wobble because they were too small ~ red and rusted wagon, a limo for my dog... For Nette's Hexiline Contest May 9th, 2025

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Sam Kauffman

Date: 5/12/2025 10:33:00 AM

Craig, belated congratulations for your delightful POTD! What a wonderful picture of childhood - a boy and his dog with a "wobbly" old wagon as a canine limo! It's a great picture. Blessings to you!

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 5/12/2025 8:39:00 AM

Congratulations on your POTD win. I enjoyed reading your creative/fun "Road Trip" write. Guess your dog rode in style. Have a wonderful day/week with your win..........

Ink Empress

Date: 5/12/2025 2:47:00 AM

Dear Craigsz, A very cute and lighthearted poem, so well written! I can imagine it as your dogs limo, would love to see your dog. I love what youv done here for the road trip! Pleasure reading this today. Congratulations on your well deserved POTD, sending you light always

Brandy Nicole

Date: 5/11/2025 7:52:00 PM

Of course, such a fancy ride for your dog. :) Your thoughts bring a smile, Craig. Congratulations my dear friend, on Poem of the Day. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 5/11/2025 4:20:00 PM

Congrats on POTD! Love this winner!

Richard Nah

Date: 5/11/2025 3:39:00 PM

Short and simple, yet brilliant and unique! Congrats!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/11/2025 10:28:00 AM

- A fun p.o.t.d. congratulations, Craig :) -

Zyrool Gifford

Date: 5/11/2025 10:08:00 AM

Hello Craig, congratulations on your POTD win with this beautifully crafted piece. Wishing you a wonderful day as you celebrate.

Tania Kitchin

Date: 5/11/2025 5:05:00 AM

Craig, a cute poem, congratulations on POTD.

Heidi Sands

Date: 5/11/2025 4:30:00 AM

I enjoy your POTD. Congratulations ! :)

Charlotte Puddifoot

Date: 5/11/2025 2:55:00 AM

i don't often read and comment on potd but for you i'll make an exception..."wheel would wobble" that's alliteration falling naturally :)

Karen Jones

Date: 5/11/2025 2:05:00 AM

A fun and adorable poem for potd! Congratulations and best wishes for the contest!

Beryl Edmonds

Date: 5/11/2025 1:59:00 AM

We all remember our favourite toys, from when we were little girls and boys.Congratulations Craig on receiving the honour of poem of the day… Beryl

CayCay Jennings

Date: 5/10/2025 10:24:00 PM

Very cute, you gave me my first giggle of May 11th - hey Mother's Day. So glad I found this gem. Oh, those red wagons. It was my little sister that I pulled around. All the best ... CayCay

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 5/10/2025 7:24:00 AM

Fantastic! I can visualize this one! Fave!

Craig Cornish
Date: 5/10/2025 7:29:00 AM

Thank you Kim -- a little fun!