Gershon Wolf Poet Rhyme

Road to Relapse

worry, worry                 curse, worse               
hurry, hurry                   rant, pant                
scurry, scurry…              shout, pout                 bail            
                                                                      fail                         
busy, busy                      fight, bite                    jail    
dizzy, dizzy                     spit, hit
in a tizzy…                      growl, howl

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Jerry Brotherton March 26, 2024 at 7:01 PM A creative poem, my friend. Loved the structure. Gershon Wolf March 26, 2024 at 7:49 PM Hey, thanks Jerry.

Sally Eslinger March 26, 2024 at 9:59 AM Gershon! Hi! This i love i find this layout works so well! I used it in publised small press where i’m put as an “avant garde” writer. Hugs! Happy Easter! Gershon Wolf March 26, 2024 at 7:42 PM Sally, you used it and knew what you were doing. As for me, not so much. Thanks, gw

Kim Rodrigues March 26, 2024 at 9:15 AM Love this! A unique one! Gershon Wolf March 26, 2024 at 7:49 PM You might even say that this one is a Unique-Horn...

Peter Dome March 26, 2024 at 1:00 AM Another great piece. Very clever. Love the flow, content, and how you can read two ways. Well done. Pete, Gershon Wolf March 26, 2024 at 7:45 PM Amazing what happens when I cross my eyes. lol. thanks, Peter.

Karen Jones March 25, 2024 at 11:53 PM Interesting how you wrote this! I read it two ways and it works better in order. What inspired this one your muse? Gershon Wolf March 26, 2024 at 7:41 PM This was actually inspired not by inspiration. Rather, it was pure desperation. ~ Desperado Dan