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Road to Relapse

worry, worry curse, worse hurry, hurry rant, pant scurry, scurry… shout, pout bail fail busy, busy fight, bite jail dizzy, dizzy spit, hit in a tizzy… growl, howl

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Jerry Brotherton

Date: 3/26/2024 7:01:00 PM

A creative poem, my friend. Loved the structure.

Gershon Wolf
Date: 3/26/2024 7:49:00 PM

Hey, thanks Jerry.

Sally Eslinger

Date: 3/26/2024 9:59:00 AM

Gershon! Hi! This i love i find this layout works so well! I used it in publised small press where i’m put as an “avant garde” writer. Hugs! Happy Easter!

Gershon Wolf
Date: 3/26/2024 7:42:00 PM

Sally, you used it and knew what you were doing. As for me, not so much. Thanks, gw

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 3/26/2024 9:15:00 AM

Love this! A unique one!

Gershon Wolf
Date: 3/26/2024 7:49:00 PM

You might even say that this one is a Unique-Horn...

Peter Dome

Date: 3/26/2024 1:00:00 AM

Another great piece. Very clever. Love the flow, content, and how you can read two ways. Well done. Pete,

Gershon Wolf
Date: 3/26/2024 7:45:00 PM

Amazing what happens when I cross my eyes. lol. thanks, Peter.

Karen Jones

Date: 3/25/2024 11:53:00 PM

Interesting how you wrote this! I read it two ways and it works better in order. What inspired this one your muse?

Gershon Wolf
Date: 3/26/2024 7:41:00 PM

This was actually inspired not by inspiration. Rather, it was pure desperation. ~ Desperado Dan