Road To Realization (Part Ii)

Con't from Part II...


Drained; an opinion he lacks
Lax for years but now he’s on track
Track wisdom; has a mental axe
Acts as a way to crash walls, fight back

Knack for writing, it became peace
Piece of heart in each written-release
Release stress; negative cease
Sees in a new light, consciousness increased

Impeach his old ways and his mind state
State his ideals through wordplay

Sure, cliché, but this is my chance
Chants that make a difference from my stance
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Mitchell Avatar
August 26, 2009 at 12:40 PM
I really liked this, both Part 1 and Part 2, especially the rhyming and wordplay, it's very clever :)
Cockburn Avatar
July 23, 2009 at 1:31 PM
well written it enjoyed reading all, thank you for your comments. priz
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